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You all just got pwned by Oblivion_Xye
Autumn Days
Once summer is over
And all turns red
You know that fall has gotten out of bed

When the air is colder
And it smells like burning leaves
Fall has come through like sand through a sieve

The wind is howling
Harvest moons come up
With bright orange and maybe red mixed together in this bright cup

All plants are like fire
Covered in leaves orange, yellow, red
They move with the wind which lead

Everyone's inside sitting next to the fire
Drinking hot cocao, wrapped up in blankets
Reading a book or stroking their pets

Soon the fire of autumn will be gone
And the ice of winter will tip toe closer
Trying to put out this fire and poser

Fall does fade
But so does winter
Into spring






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Rose-Colored World
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 06:18pm
Aww! It's so pretty oblivion! I like it alot!!


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 07:07pm
My friends can do poems and I can't...maybe I should try?



Red Samba
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Chikyu Kodomo
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 07:36pm
I think it's a great poem; the perfect thing for autumn. It's already starting to become winter here.


commentCommented on: Fri Dec 22, 2006 @ 12:13am
love it! not my favorite of yours but still great.



cowz_rule018
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Skittlez_xo
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commentCommented on: Fri Dec 22, 2006 @ 05:03pm
hey cute poem! biggrin nice job!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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