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My Demon Within!
I looked at the body of what used to be my teammate…my best friend…my…brother. The thought of his death angered me so bad the ooze from my mouth seemed to be covering my body. What made it worse…it was my own father…the man I thought loved me…the man I would have done anything to have back!
My father took his claws and struck me in the heart…how…could he……
The more I got angry the more the black ooze began to consume me! LIKE I CARED! ALL I WANTED WAS VENGEANCE!
All I could see was pure white…then a dark man came up to me.
“If you want revenge I can grant it,” he looked at me with big pure white eyes…his body was pure black…in a way it was looking at my shadow, “Who are you?” I asked…then he simply answered with a smile, “I’m you…so take my hand…and vengeance will be ours!”
I couldn’t resist the thought…so I took his hand……this had to be the worst idea I have ever done…
I then woke up from my dream to see that my body had been taken over by my dark shadow…my…inner demon! I felt more powerful then I had ever been before! But…this form came with a price…a price of evil.
I then attacked my father with speed unimaginable…I first took a kick at his first knee cap…It shattered inside his leg…
My father then let out a scream of pain…but my body only took this as a joke…then I grabbed my fathers jaw and ripped it out! I started to wonder…not because I care for my father…but was this the way I really wanted to avenge Tec…
I started to yell in anger…I began to punch my father…rapidly with all the power I’ve ever thrown in a fist…
It started to rain and thunder.
He then fell to the floor…I only jumped on him and started punching his face in! I was punching…and punching…I couldn’t stop…I WANTED HIM DEAD!
PUNCH AFTER PUNCH HIS FACE WAS UNDESCRIBABLE! DIE! DIEE! DIEEE!

Then…Sora…R.C….Kyo…grabbed me…and started to hug…
I began to tear up, and at the same time turn back, with a few changes…why…why did he take Tec…WHY! I began to cry and shout, “It’s not fair!”
My friends only held me harder…
“IT’S NOT FAIR!!!”
I cried and cried…till the rain stopped...then I only stared…at Tec’s body…I guess…if he wanted to die……it was to die helping me……
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thefiresofhell
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 15, 2007 @ 05:33am
good story 2 things 1 i wouldnt hug u if u were the emperor xd 2 im guessin that after all those punches hes dead

EDIT: correction ninja i said id do anything for the emperor, then i said even in that way... i ment cooking him dinner u sicko what goes on in ur mind, probably the naked lady on photobucket xd


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 12:39am
kyo you would be gay for the emperor you said it yourself so yes you would hug him xd awesome chapter Ill read the next chapter tomorrow...maybe...



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