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Another poem....this time it was inspired by a pic I saw.....later I may post the pic.... I held you in my arms And felt the warmth of your blood pierce my hands The tears flowed form my eyes A few landed upon your cheek You placed your hand upon my cheek And wiped a few idle tears away Your other hand roamed to mine You gripped it and looked into my eyes You smiled your last smile And sighed your last sigh You closed your eyes and laid back your head And silently slipped away I held your limp body close Fearing that if I were to let go You'd drift away into thin air You left this world, and you left me The years have passed And I lay here now Breathing my last few breaths And slowly, I slip away Now we meet at Heaven's gates Together once again As we spend our eternal lives Together in each other's arms

Posted by: Sasuke_Uchiha_Girl2 Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 10:57pm

Help me look like this!

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Commented on: Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 11:00pm


	That soo sad...yet happy....inspiring!!!! 3nodding

Commented on: Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 11:02pm


	Well thank you.......I was watching a sad episode of full house, and then I saw the pic that won't show up......and it hit meh

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Commented on: Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 11:02pm


	Once again a AWESOME poem. U can visualize all of it happening and thats what i like most about poetry. Though very sad but gets better in the ending still makes me want to cry though cry

Commented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 01:02am


	Well, I'm glad ppl like my poetry......I dunno what it is.....i haven't wrote poetry in awhile then all of a usdden I ave htese popping up into my head

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Commented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 10:31pm


	Well its aweome. Yeah i kno its weird thats happened to me be4

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