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Petals Like Pages
Blank Canvas
Eyes deep and empty like a blank canvas
Heart brittle and broken like and old wine glass
The pocket watch has stopped ticking
But still empty hours pass...

Ribbons, Lace, and Curls
Someone who is worth pearls
But no one wants to live here
Nothing nice, not even near...

Porcline Skin, Ruby Lips, and hair with Perfect Tips
Shining Sun, Rainy Showers
All alone she passes hours...

As
Tourtured as she is
Now no help can come
No way
No how...






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Sayaira
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 12:07am
Wow.. You write REALLY deep poems..

They would be perfect for work in my Language class xd But dont give my teachers any ideas gonk


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 01:33am
hah...thanks I think? well this isn't one of my best poems...I could put some of my other ones in here then again I don't really feel like looking up any of my old peoms so it will most likely be new stuff that goes on this journal of mine. heart



Souzousei
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XxStand_In_The_RainxX
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 09, 2007 @ 12:24am
This poem is so lovely!!! LOVE IT!!! I really like how you write poems about lolitas and such. LOLITA GIRLSS ARE AWESOME!!! I'm also a big fan of them.


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