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iPandah
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Sonnet
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[.Death Depart - My Father.]


    User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. Smiles lay on the day, frowns that very night.

    Night falls upon us, tears in every eye.

    Taken from his bed, relationships tight.

    Each person crying, for him not to die.

    At the hospital, from night till morning.

    Entering the room, to hear of his breath.

    Other family members wait, in mourning.

    I lay my head on his chest, before death.

    The last breath taken, near to his brother.

    Death had occurred, and a heart beat remained.

    Within the graveyard, next to his mother.

    Deep within his tomb, eternally named.

    Lay beneath the ground, in his bed of death.

    Twenty-four white doves take flight on wind’s breath.
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Amai Tatsu
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comment Commented on: Tue Feb 13, 2007 @ 06:11pm
-gives you a hug-
lol remember how he would gave us asparagus and we would scrape it off our plate and into the hedges? xd


comment Commented on: Thu Feb 22, 2007 @ 02:28am
Hmm, seems interesting. It kept a good flow of story.
What class was this for?



ThisUserNeverExisted
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iPandah
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comment Commented on: Thu Feb 22, 2007 @ 11:19pm
The Sonnet was for English class

Thank you! I'm glad it does, i didn't know if other's would understand it cause they didn't witness it but if it keeps a good flow of story then I'm happy heart


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