Just posting a poem, and like the title says, it's badly written. It's... Kinda old. I came across it on my computer, so just bear with it
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I've once dreamed of a land so true
So beautiful in blue
Where the twilight falls, giving birth a day so new
I've once dreamed of a paradise
Where we all are in harmony, and we accept our flaws
Where life is worth living, and no one is lost
I've dreamed of so much
I've seen so much
Things you'd only read i na fairytale
My flawless dreams, all too frail
It's all too real
The pain deepens as it rips my soul to tattered pieces
It feels as if i'm not needed
It seems as if i'm bleeding
And silently crying tears of ice
Casting a shadow, outlined pure white
But as i lay in the green spring grass
I look to the sky, for patience i ask
PAtience to get me out of this hell on earth
So i can live again through my own rebirth
Like a spring wildflower, I am at your feet
Like a spring wildflower, you walk all over me
And slowly i mature, whither and die
The come spring again, I come back to life
Life is too short to waste
So much beauty in the air
Life is often a horrible place
Deep within my minds despair
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That's really good. You need to not Critisize yourself like that, I mean you should Think about it before saying it's bad because it's not.
Sure all poems can be better, But your's is just fine.