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my life? yea. sure. i guess it is.
its all my rants about everything i can think of
another thing that popped in my head
all the tears are stuck inside
no more emotion
they no longer reside
what happened to devotion?

things change so much
what are you to do?
what about the other stuff
what happened to you?

what will happen next
how far can this go
i tried to be the best
but now i am low






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ClownUnit02
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 27, 2007 @ 10:41pm
The meter and rhythm were too irregular. It's pretty good otherwise.


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