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be nice im putting in a poem i hope u like it!


FALLING SNOW

see the pretty snowflakes
falling from the sky
on the wall and and housetops
soft and thick they lie.

on the window ledges
on the branches bare
now how fast they gather
filling all the air.

look into the garden
where the grass was green
covered by the snowflakes
not a blade is seen.

now the bare black bushes
all look soft and white
every twig is laden
what a pretty sight!

i hope u liked it please comment on it and tell me what you like or dislike.




heres another one...

AFTERNOON IN FEBRUARY

the day is ending
the night is decending
the marsh is frozen
the river dead

through clouds like ashes
the red sun flashes
on village windows
that glimmer red

the snow is recomensing
on burried fences
mark no longer
the road or the plain

the bell is pealing
and every feeling
within me resbonds
to the dismal knel

the shadows trailing
my heart is bewailing
and tolling inside

hope u liked that one too! (if not please be honest)

heres another1

DANCE OF SPRING

spring runs like a cheeta through a feild
the flowers jump in with all the beauty they weild
the bees hum a song with voices great and clear
and the clouds start to cry with thousands of tears

then whene its all over spring runs away
and the next visitor,summer comes to stay
now the hot sun has fully awoken
and the final words of spring have finnaly been spoken

but spring leaves a reminder to remember the days
of when it was here in april,june ,and may
for the days spring lived have not yet died
because the bees still sing and the clouds still cry.

theres another... i love doin this!



.... why r u stillreading im done?