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Things that affect my mood
wheather it be an error that frustrates me, a snoby person, a lucky find, if it happens i will write it down here.
These are some poems I Wrote! Really good ones!!
Yes. I guess i might write a little poetry here and there. my poems dont neccesarily rhyme, or flow 100% smoothly. thats because i write what i feel and thats how my poems turn out. poems are supposed to be from the heart anyway. and so that said i dont stick to any particular style and know just about nothing about structuring them. i just write how i feel. here are three of my recent bests:

Arms of the Angel

Darkness all around,
seems endless,
a never ending nightmare,
when hope has faded,
a light shines,
like an angel,
the light brings a lost joy,
a warmth like no other,
like the moon on a clear summer night,
finally the lost suffering has ended,
thus a love is born,
out of the ashes of the shadow,
burned away by the angel,
a love that grows each second,
with each hour passing,
time seems an endless ecstacy of happiness,
as the angel takes the lost soul,
cradles it in it's heavenly arms,
the soul is no longer lost upon the great shadow,
the soul is home,
fear and pain no longer exist,
only the purest happiness,
at last the soul has found its place,
a place among the angels,
a place that is sacred,
that place is in that great angel's arms,
and the beautiful angel's heart,
happiness and love,
the only emotions felt inside the angel's grasp,
the soul now knows true love.

I dedicate that one to horsegal 101 my gf. i thought about how she makes me feel and wrote that one straight from my heart.

Consumed

As I stand,
I can't see in front of me,
blinded by my rage,
slipping out of reality,
I have no way to control my mind,
as it melts away from the fire inside,
sanity decaying,
hate consumes me,
i can bear it no longer,
the paranoia that is twisting me,
inner strength demolished,
i am human no longer,
i am destroyed,
a mere demon,
the past has destroyed my future,
my memories haunt my tortured soul,
i am trapped in a cage,
i am unable to move as my inner self burns me alive,
with no mercy,
no end,
i am eternally tormented,
by my own hate and memories of the past.

That is about my anger. (obviously DE DEE DEE)

This one i have not named. i just cant find one that suits it.

You that i love,
that i long for so dearly,
with a passion not seen,
but every once in a great while,
you that i hold above all else,
above life itself,
you that is more beautiful than an angel in my eyes,
you that i so greatly love,
it is you that has filled the void of my heart,
and it is you that has purified my soul,
but alas,
it is you that is so distant,
so far away,
a passion that is just beyong my grasp,
when your true love is just out of arms reach,
that is TRUE HELL.

so what do you think?






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Jessybelldove
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 22, 2007 @ 09:52pm
Bwahahahaha! Dares are fun ;3 heart heart


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 23, 2007 @ 03:27am
I really like the first poem.



Razorblade_Romance17
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