This is a story I started a year or so ago and just now found it. Please comment on what you think.
"I sit on the edge, the thin line, between life and death, but a funny thing is, I fear nothing, I fear not death, I fear not life," these where the final words of a being, this being had the ears and tail of a cat. They line with fur the color of flame, they were soft as silk. This person had gone threw the worst life a persone could ask for.
His life began as a tiny infint, a crying helpless new born. We take you back to this time.
A small boy lay in the hospital. the nurses where washing him off franticly, he was premature. The mother, she sat on the hospital bed bleeding. As the nurses dried hiim off, a flick of flame, or what they thought was flame, flashed across there faces. The two middle aged women lookat each other, wich would have been wierd concidering they where twins. Then as they glanced back towards the infant, a pair og triangular shaped things appeared on his head. A striken look of pure fear appeared on the two helpers faces. They slowly began to back away, as if the baby not even able to walk yet, would attack them. As they approached the doctor and told him what had hapned and what they saw, he wondered over to the baby.
As the doctor approached, the babys mother let out a scream. The doctor spun around to see, the covers to the bed where she sat, covered in blood. The doctor rushed to her side and took off her shirt. The shirt reviled what it was hiding. A long scar running the length of her stomach was bleeding profusley. This scar was from the C- Section they had to perform on her when the baby was born. The doctor quickly prononcuded the scene.
"One of her stiches has broken, she is bleeding profusley and will die if we dont help her," he said as he franticly started to gather his supplies and work on her.
But in the end the mother died from loss of blood. The last words that she ever spoke were, "Kit, the babies name is Kit." Then she died. And all was silent except for the crying coming from the baby.
`King Spork` Community Member 
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