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are you a poet
The Whimpering Beast

A beast that whimpers is a true beast
The beast shows fear and also stregnth
As modest the beast is friendly

The beast does choose who is friend or foe
As wary it can be this beast is never happy
It's always sad and it sleeps crying

One of the beast's friends brought it a female
The beast rejected and ran away crying
While the beast was alone a beautiful woman approced it

The beast growled at her furiously
The woman touched the beast's fur
It calmed and went to sleep

She smiled and touched the best's heart
It's heart is pure and loving gold
The woman eventually died and the beast carried her to be burried in honor






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bodyslam bailey
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 11, 2007 @ 03:20am
That is very good.


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 12:12am
This is so beatuiful! heart Your amazing honey heart



NitaRules400
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Catsy Kittsy
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 11, 2009 @ 10:07pm
I WUV IT!!! but ummmmm from one poet to another (if u still write poetry, that is)....It's more like a story, which i know some poems are, but this is more like a story from a book. NOT the beginning I WUVVED THAT PART!!! but closer to the end it became more and more like a book sort of like......beauty and the beast? haha STILL AWESOME heart


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