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Just a place for me to write. Notes, storys, ideas, quotes, and poetry. If you have a problem with what I wrote, you can private message me, but that doesn't mean I will pay attention to it. ~PNDGirl
The Dance
As I spun I could feel him watching
Even though I made it up as I went
He watched.
He made me feel as though I was on a stage
With a huge audience
Not in a room just with a loving grandfather
I stop spinning and leap into a clumsy set of steps
All the while he is “oohing” and “ahhing”
And clapping and laughing
I start to laugh too
We both laugh so hard I fall
Right into his lap.
“That was a great performance, my little dancer.”
He says after the laughter dies down
“Thank you, Papa.” I say as my little mind wanders off
Then I am back into the next made up dance
To an imaginary song
On a invisible stage
With a pretend costume
In front of a one-of-a-kind real loving grandfather..

Written by Erin Mason
Based on a true dance.





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    myheartbeats2hgb
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    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 01:29am
    Holy cats!!

    That's amazing. And wonderful and fabulous and spectacular!!

    Oh, I luff my Erin <33333


    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 05:23am
    Beautiful.



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