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"My LovestorY"
This is the lovestory i made plz give comments
My heartbreaker story:
Boy: baby we need to talk

Girl: kyle, wat do u mean?

Boy: sumthin has come up...

Girl: wat? Wuts wrong? Is it bad?

Boy: i dont want to hurt u baby

Girl: *thinks* omg i hope he doesnt
break up with
me... I love him so much

Boy: baby are you there??

Girl: yea im here wut is so important??

Boy: im not sure if i should say

Girl: well u already brought it up, so
please just
tell
me.

Boy: im leaving....

Girl: baby wut are u talking about?? I
dont want u
to leave me, i love you

Boy: not like that, i mean im moving
far away

Girl: why? All of ur famliy lives over
here.

Boy: well my father is sending me away
to a
boarding skool far away.

Girl: i cant believe this.

[FATHER: (picks up tha other fone,
interrupts &
yells furiously) ERiKA, wat did i tell
you about
talking to boys?!!!!!....Get off the
damn fone!! (And
hangs up)]

Boy: wow ur father sounds really mad

Girl: u know how he gets, but anywayz
i dont
want
you to go

Boy: would you run away with me?

Girl: baby, u know i would, i would do
anything for
u, but i cant... U dont know wut would
happen if i
did. My dad would kill me !!

Boy: *sad* its ok i understand i
guess..

Girl: *thinking* i cant believe wuts
going on

Boy: i need to give u sumthing 2nite
b/c i am
leaving on flight 1-80 in tha morning,
so i need to
see you now.

Girl: ok i will sneak out & meet u at
tha park

Boy: ok ill meet u there in 20min

[They meet at a nearby park, they both
hug
eachother. And he gives her a note.]

Boy: here u go, this is for you i
gotta go.

Girl: *tear* (begins to cry)

Boy: baby dont cry, u know i love
you...but i have
2 go

Girl: ok (begins to walk away)

[They both go back home. And erika
begins to
read tha letter he gave her]

It says.....

Erika,

U probably already know that im
leaving, i knew
this would be better if i wrote a
letter
explaining tha
truth about how much i care about you.
The truth
is, is that i never loved you, i hated
you so much, u
are my b***h and dont u ever forget
that. I never
cared about you, and never wanted to
talk to you,
n be around u. U really have no clue
how much i
hate you. Now that im leaving i
thought u should
know that i hate you b***h, u never
did tha right
thing, and u were never there. I didnt
think i could
hate someone as much as i hate you.
And i never
want to see you, for the rest of my
life, i will never
miss kissing you like before, i never
want to cuddle
up, how we used to. I will not miss
you and thats a
promise. U never had my love, and i
want you to
remember that. b***h u keep this
letter bcuz this
may be tha last thing u have from me.
I hate you
so much. i will not talk to you soon
b***h....
Goodbye
- Kyle

[ erika begins to cry, she throws tha
paper in tha
garbage & crys for hours ]

....A day passes, she is sad,
depressed and she
feels so lonely.... Then she gets a
fone call....

Friend: how are u feeling?

Girl: i just cant believe this happend
i thought he
loved me.

Friend: o, about that. Kyle left me a
msg. A few
days ago. He told me to tell u to look
in ur jacket
pocket or something...

Girl: ummm ok

[She finds a piece of paper in tha
jacket, It says...]

Baby i hope u find this before u read
my letter. I
knew ur dad might read it, so i
switched a few
words...

Hate = Love

Never = Alwayz

b***h = Baby

Will not= will

........ I hope u didnt take that
seriously because i
love you with all my heart, and it was
so hard to let
you go thats y i wanted u to run away
with me...

-Kyle]


Girl: omg its a letter, Kyle does love
me!!, he must
of slipped it into my pocket when he
hugged me. I
cant believe how stupid I am!!

Friend: lol ok but i g2g... Call me
later

Girl: *happy*ok bye, i'll be at home
waiting for my
baby to call me !!

...... Erika turns tha T.V. on......

[Breaking news] "An airplane has
crashed. Over
47
young boys died, we are still
searching for
Survivors...This is a tragedy we will
never forget,
this plane was flight 1-80...it was on
its way to an
all boys boarding school..." Reporter
says.

[ she turns off the tv....3 days
later, she kills
herself, because of tha fact that Kyle
was dead &
she had nothing to Live for... ]

....A day after that the fone rings.
Nobody
answers. It was Kyle, he called to
leave a
msg. "Its Kyle, i guess ur not home
so, I called 2
let u know that im alive, i missed my
flight b/c i
had 2 see u one last time. So i hope
ur not
worried. I am staying for good. Sorry
if u got
scared, i promise 2 make it up 2 u
everything will
be a be ok i love you so much...call
me asap bye!






User Comments: [17] [add]
Pencil12345
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 12:26am
Hi!Ang ganda ng journal mo


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 02:37am
those were really good. i should have cried but i didnt..



Crimson Blood Fala
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Lil Erie
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 04:03pm
i cried at the last one when she died


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 07:12pm
i loved the storys the were very good. they want to make me cry but i didn't.



x_Orange_Violet_x
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khamillah
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 23, 2007 @ 05:48am
omg ganda nmn sad nga lng crying crying crying


commentCommented on: Mon Apr 23, 2007 @ 12:24pm
ang ganda..nakaka-inspire naman...parang gusto kong gumawa ng sarili kong kwento ....hehe biggrin biggrin ...nice job.. biggrin



iheartzubat
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Sakura_belldandy
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 25, 2007 @ 01:55am
The stories were so sad crying but they were written beautifully


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 05:47am
gonk gonk gonk gonk
I'M GONNA CRY!!
crying crying crying crying



TetsukiMizu
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iPatricia
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commentCommented on: Sat May 05, 2007 @ 04:22pm
ALAM MO DINADAAN KO NA LANG SA ISIP KO YUNG PAGMUMURA KO!!!!!!!!!!!!
KASI ANG GANDA NIYA
ANG KATI NANAMAN NG MATA KO EWAN KO KUNG BAKIT PARANG FEELING KONG MAGMURA KAPAG MAY MAGANDANG ENTRY GAYA NITO


commentCommented on: Sun May 13, 2007 @ 10:58pm
OMG I READ THIS STORY OUT LOUD TO MY FRIENDS ADN WE ALL ALMOST CRIED!! crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying



CryptidAllyCat
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wype
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commentCommented on: Sun May 20, 2007 @ 06:14pm
*sniffles*


commentCommented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 04:22am
nice pare...keep it up...someday u might be a writer...^_^



my_lifeless_heart
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Tenshi_Sakura1
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commentCommented on: Thu May 24, 2007 @ 02:11am
one word...wow, that was realy good u shud so become a writer. ur story kept me wanting to read more, i hope u write more cuz i want to find out what happens next.
-tear- no i just have sand in my eyes crying


commentCommented on: Sun May 27, 2007 @ 06:26am
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sniff...sniff



Chizus
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WolfPrincess_Tetsune
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commentCommented on: Wed May 30, 2007 @ 12:22am
Omg crying
im sorry you dont know me but i was looking for friends and i found you page
well anywayz
i love this its so sad but yet romantic......
did you write this.......


commentCommented on: Thu Jun 07, 2007 @ 10:12pm
Gahhh! Now I'm crying!!!! crying crying crying crying (also you are a really good writer keep it up!..now back to crying) gonk gonk gonk gonk gonk



Megalochondriac
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