note: after you left i decided to have the elementals look like mystical-ish creatures or other animals that i could see as each elemental. here they are so you know.:
fire-red pheonix
water- blue chinese dragon
wind- white cheeta (kaitlyn's idea)
earth-black wolf
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after:
"Yeah, I can go first," she said with a little excitement. She wasn't sure why this was different from her previous training, but she was happy to train now. She thought it was kind of weird.
elzia walked out to the middle of the feild, and turned to look at them. she waited wondering what she was supposed to do now. when no one told her what she should do, or what they would be doing she asked, "what am i supposed to do?" she screamed to them as she blushed a bright tomato red.
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after the part you just added for me. sweatdrop :
elzia giggled putting her hand over her mouth. she then turned and tapped her chin thinking of what to do. she remembered that conjuring a fire elemental took alot of energy, and decided to make the wind and water elements. she looked at a near by water and stuck out a hand towards it. water floated out of it and started to form an animal like creature. she then looked up to the sky and stuck her hand up to it. as air began to swirl around it formed another animal. she looked at them with a smile, to see their reaction. (not exactly what i had started with, but as close as i could come.)
i need some kind of encouraging responce please. biggrin
she smiled, and turned her head. when she didn't face them, her face seemed to take a different shape. she looked serious, and seemed to be concentrating more. her hands and fingers seemed to dance as she made them fight eachother. one no better than the other, both the water and wind elementals fought eachother and took hits. it seemed that the harder the attack on the other the more she seemed to be getting hurt.
the water elemental that looked like a blue chinese dragon, snaped at the white cheeta, that was the wind element, and she seemed to twitched. a small droplet of blood slid down her neck, but she continued. the cheeta wiggled out of the dragons fangs, and struck at it with it's claws scratching at it's chest. she stepped back slightly, and her chest too started too bleed. her eyes started to cloud over as she continued concentrating intensly, and her fingers continued to dance.
as she went on the beautiful blue sky slowly started to turn into the darkness of the night. elzia hadn't noticed as she was concentrating to hard on controling her elements, and slowly could feel it.
not really sure that's where you wanted me to take that, but i just wrote like i told you. my mind and fingers kinda took over sweatdrop lol. though she isn't really just taking the hits with no way to keep her going. i was thinking that she was going to be able to slowly heal herself as she continued to fight which i guess is part of the reason why she loses energy so quickly. and that the trainers could see this and later train her to hold her energy better, and gain more the longer she trains with them. get what i mean???
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