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meh
crapy poems i write off and on...
The Death in Winter

Your warm blood mixes with the white icy snow,
I hear you scream for help,
When I shove the sharp knife into your heart.
Your warm blood slowly get cold while running down the knife.
I stand there looking into your eyes of pain and cry for you,
Because I can’t understand why, Why I did that to you?
I slowly remove the knife from your none beating heart,
I wipe your cold tears off of your pale cold face,
And hold you in my arms, holding you tightly saying your name.
“How could you, I thought you loved me?”
Those were the last words you said to me.
What have I done to you?
Now I stand there looking down over your pale cold body,
And say “ I did love you, but I don’t know why I did it.”

Jan 25, 2007


I hope with this blade in my hand,
that I can get rid of the pain beating
in my chest. All it does is makes me
hurt like so, and all i want it to do
is stop, even if it means ending this
life of mine. I promise I shall never cry for
you ever again, since you moved on without
me, all i want to do is die and never be
wounded again. There is no other love that
I wanted besides yours. As the blade
goes into my chest. I can’t help, but
think of all the happy memories of you and
I had together. My blood slowly runs down
the handle of the knife, and down my hand.
The painful heart slowly stops beating, as that
once lover of yours dies thinking about you and
the happiness they once had with you.

May 05,2007






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RAINBOW JELLYFISH
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 03:01am
wow, that's deep... eek ...


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 11:12pm
My hands are around your neck

Wow. Those were great, besides the few typos I saw.

And I think I hate you..



Mrs Maveck
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