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this is my attempt at the prologue to an erotic novel.this did in fact happen to me and it was probably the best sexual experience ive ever had.ive been planning to turn my real ife experiences into a novel of this genre.so leave comments and be brutally honest.i want to know what ive done right and what ive done wrong.also,if anybody wants to help me extend this novel,i fully encourage you to offer
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also,if you don't want to give experiences,i would encourage you to share yours

she ran her tongue the length of me as i slowly stiffened.the moist warmth of her mouth slowly enveloped every inch as her head bobbed back and forth,faster and harder.as i neared my end,she pulled off and worked her way up.as my heart slowed to a normal beat,i stayed fully rigid.when she finally reached my face,our mouths connected,our tongues intertwined and my heartbeat began to rise once more.she then pulled away and in a sudden blur,her skin,oh,her perfectly smooth sun-darkened skin brushed against mine,her firm,supple breasts ran against my arm as she quickly moved behind me.then,the moment of perfection,of pleasure,no.ecstacy.as her almost silken brown hair brushed against my cheek and over my shoulder.she placed her lips upon my neck and succulently kissed between the neck and shoulder, where the muscle sits.then,a lick of the lips,which then parted, releasing her warm,steamy breath on my neck and flowing down my back like a river over a hill.throughout this act of pure ecstacy,i could not move,bound by the pure pleasure.and as this took place the final stroke to end it all was finally delivered.when i didn't think i could handle anymore,her perfect teeth,which had not been ground once,did not force,but rather,sank in to my neck like a hot knife through butter.as the teeth eventually were removed and her mouth separated from my neck,her mouth red and dripping the juice of both our happiness,i cried out in orgasm with blood running down my chest and dripping on my leg.as i finally reached my climax she moved her arm around and over my now pouring shoulder and her hand gripped my throbbing manhood.her hand continued to shake up and down like a piston as i came over and over again,red and white intertwining into a single liquid as i began to drift from reality,into pure pleasure.then there was nothing and as i awoke from my sleep,i felt lightheaded and noticed a bandage on my shoulder where the teeth had sunk in.when i saw her,i asked what had happened.apparently we had kept going for hours after i had lost memory,which would explain the friction burnt thighs and the loss of feeling in both legs...
Mood: highly aroused