PART ONE
The frosty and freezing day of winter was beginning to take its' shape. Espienza, a lonely fourteen year old cuddled under a tree. She had a pale pearl face, with pitch black eyes. She was homeless.
The winter was 10 degrees below 0. Espienza, oddly felt warm. She discovered that she had magical powers. "I can do anything that I want to ..." Espienza told herself. She felt the warm that she never felt before. She lived her life cold, she never experienced love and compassion before. She felt good about her powers. She made food appear, any food that she'd like to appear, she could do it. She could get ANYTHING that she wanted ; until evil struck to her.
PART TWO
A blazing hot fire rapidly shot towards her. She didn't know how to control her powers! The wound was like a bloody gash, and it was red like amber. "I can heal myself!" Espienza thought. She started healing herself, but her powers started to weaken. The mist of her healing power started to fade. She looked at the full moon, and it started to ... change. She was losing her powers to the moon. Espienza's powers were coming from the moon, it was her strongest point with a full moon.
She got weak and fell straight to the grass covered with ice. She punctured herself with the sharp ice which felt like needles stabbing into her skin. She was bloody and so weak. The unknown source of the fire bolt disappeared. It left her -almost- dieing, and hurt very badly. Espienza went straight into a deep sleep, like a coma.
About the Author
My name is Miana, but people call me Mia. I write fantasy/realistic fiction short stories, that I wish people will enjoy. I love to role-play, and I need a role-playing partner right now, so if you want to role-play, just PM me. I've been playing Gaia Online for about 2-3 months. I really appreciate tips for my stories, and I will accept them. The gold will go towards my questing, and I wish to get my dream avatar. Please don't ask me for Gaia gold, I will be donating to people once i finish getting my dream avatar. Check out my FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions) below for more information.
FAQ
Frequently Asked Questions
Q.Can you write a story for me so I can sell it for Gaia gold?
A. No, this is -my- own talent and if I see anyone stealing my story, which is illegal, I will report them, and Gaia will be taking it on with legal action. If you wish to sell -your- talent, than I suggest you to write it yourself.
Q.How do you write so well?
A. It comes up in my head with creativity. Here's a little guide for great writing:
~Setting:
Have a great setting, sunsets, parks, houses, cities, eg. for a miserable story, maybe a dark gray gloomy city will be great as a setting.
~Plot:
The plot is probably the most important thing. You should a graphic organizer of some type to write down your ideas, and squish them all together. Just make sure that they make sense! wink
~Characters:
Make sure that in your story, you DESCRIBE your characters personality (if they have one). What would make it really interesting would be if you used unusual names. It would make your own story stand out, like no one else's!
~Type:
Make sure that your "type" of story will be committed to your story (does it sound right?) What I mean is, don't say that it is a romance story when all of it has nothing to do with romance, it would make the story make no sense at all!
~Ending:
Make your ending sad, happy, it doesn't matter. A lot of people say "THE END" but there isn't really a point of saying it. Everyone who reads your story will know that it is the end of the story, so DON'T put "the end" at the end of your story.
Q.Can I have your autograph?!?!?/
A.Well, if I don't really know you in person, NO. (Don't ask me anything personal, autographs only go to friends :])
I hope that helps! If you have any more questions, just PM me and I'll add the question on here!
