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The Night of Passion

Holding her he looks into her eyes
The night sky glistening above them
Stars sparkling for just them

He smiles and plants a kiss on her cheek
Her face turning slight red
His lips warm

He tells her he loves her
He tells her he needs her

She smiles and repeats the same
She loves him
She needs him
She would die without him

He smiles at the added words
And holds her close
Running his hand over the inside of her thigh.

She blushes more
And rubs his leg
His face turns red
And he goes up her skirt

They lay there in the grass
Being bathed by the light of the moon
Being shaded by the leaves of the trees
Being heated by the touch of their bodies

He caresses her cheek
She rubs his back
Their naked bodies shining dimly in the moonlight
Their eyes sparkling gold for each other
Their love burning like the hot depths of the sun

Their love making was incredible
He did everything right
She did everything needed
And they both let out moans of sheer pleasure

The gods watched the unison of beauty
Between the man and the woman
As they became one in one symbolic act.


this poem is one of the best i have ever written. please, everyone, give me your comments. if this needs improvement i want to know. please everyone criticizm is appreciated