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ok ppl, I'm just going to turn my journal into a story place...thing...w/e, anyways, comment them, um...so will be love stories and if you aint going to comment anything nice stfu and keep it to yourself, and if you know me dont start to tease me
OK BEFORE YOU READ THIS I HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, YES THOSE NAMES ARE MINE AND MY GF'S, REAL LIFE FRIENDS, DO ME A FAV, WHEN YOU READ THIS STFU ABOUT IT CAUSE I KNOW I WONT HEAR THE END OF IT confused , BUT YA, LEAVE NICE COMMENTS....OK I'M DONE



THE STORY OF THE VAMPIRE AND GIRL WHO FELL IN LOVE

Vampire clothing-jet black long pants, black sleeveless shirt, and black cloak trimmed red
Vampire human form-Black cargo pants, skin tight white shirt, black hoodie, and black boots
Beth’s clothing-Black tank top, back tight flares pants, and bare feet

Luis the main vampire takes his nightly fly for someone to kill and drain blood from. As he flies around and he notices a girl walking alone on a path surrounded by forest. He decides to fly down to her thinking (now there is my target), as he comes closer he notices she is becoming more and more beautiful, he thinks to his self (she is really pretty, I have to be careful not to fall in love with this one…not like last time). Alone as the girl named Beth walks on her own little way quietly mumbling to herself, “why…what did I do wrong to make him do that to me…”. Luis flies into the forest right behind her and changes into a human form. Beth hears something behind her and turns around “who is there?” she hears nothing then a bush rumbles next to her, “hey! Who is there!!?” she slowly backs away and a quarrel comes out and runs up a tree, “oh…-sigh- it was just a little quarrel…it’s so adorable ^_^” Luis walks up behind her, “what is?” Beth freaks out and screams, “ahh!!! Don’t do that!! You just scared me!” he quickly replies “oh sorry.” Beth turns around and her lips touch his and she jumps back, “ah I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to do that!” Luis looks at her funny, “um? Ok…but besides that…what are you doing out so late? I’m mean like…its really late…why would you be out here by yourself?” she looks at him “I….I just need to be alone…something happened earlier…” she hides her teary eyes, Luis looks at her puzzled, “hey…if you want to go somewhere instead of get lost out here, you can come to a little place I have out here, and you might want to say the night cause you seem really tired…” she quickly replies “ok…thanks that really sweet of you…lead the way…” He turns around and starts to walk along a narrow path. She follows behind thinking (wow…he is so sweet and so cute…but I don’t think I’m ready for another heart break…)
They arrive at a small cottage and Luis goes and opens the door, “come in, and make yourself at home” Beth walks in looking around, “it’s cozy…” he smiles, “thanks” and walks in next to her, “hey…there is a closet with some clothes in it, you can look through them and freshen up cause your kind of a little messy”, she smiles, “thanks…I could use a shower, but why are you being so nice? I mean your being really sweet”, she then says to herself (and I really like it), he smiles, “well it’s just something I do”, he then gets serious and thinks to his self (oh man…remember Luis you can’t fall in love again…) she looks at him, “hey? You ok?” Luis gets out of his daze, “oh ya sorry…I’m fine, but ya, the room is right down there”, you follow down to where I pointed, “thanks, I’ll be a while, and thanks again…” she thinks (OMG he is so damn sweet and so freakin’ cute!!!!!!) Luis sits down on the chair (oh man…Luis snap out of it…you can’t love her! You can’t!)
Later on she come out in a black tank top, black flared pants, and bare feet. Luis looks up and down her, (oh no…she looks great…), “you got great taste…” she giggles “thank you, oh…why do you have girl clothes?” he smiles and laughs then gets kind of sad, “there was this girl…” she looks at him funny, “you ok? Oh ya one thing, my name is Beth, and yours would be?” he smiles a bit, “its Luis…and ya…I-I’m fine…” Beth walks to him and puts her hand on him, “what is the matter sweetie?” she quickly things (OMG! Did I just say that!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!) Luis doesn’t say anything about the pet name and replies, “its just that….this girl who ment a lot to me, but we couldn’t be together…because…” he breaks off and changes the subject, “but anyways…you want something to eat or drink?” she looks at him funny, “yes please, I’m kind of hungry and a little thirsty” he gets up and goes to the kitchen and brings back some food and a glass of warm milk, “hope you don’t mind milk its all I have right now…” she sweetly smiles, “yes, and thank you” she eats the food and drinks the milk, “thank you, it was really nice…” he smiles, “thank you…you look tired, and its late, you want to take a sleep?” she smiles weakly, “ya…I’m really tired and kind of bummed out about what happened earlier….so yes, I would like to take a little sleep…but can you take me there…I’m to tired…” he looks at her funny, “um ok” he picks her up and carries her to the room, she then thinks (oh my…he is so…so great…) he gets to the room and puts her on the bed, “you can sleep here” he sits down next to you, she lays down, “hey…can you get me a blanket its kind of cold” he smiles, “ok, be right back” he leaves to get a blanket from the closet. On the way to the closet he thinks (I’m falling for her…I can’t do this…I don’t want to get hurt again…) he brings the blanket and covers her, “I hope you get a good rest”, he smiles and walks to the door, she then whispers “I-I love you…”, he stops, and smiles then goes to the door and closes it.
Later that night Luis was consulting to his self, “no, no, no…This can’t be happening…I really wish she wasn’t so damn lovely! But yet…no! I won’t let this happen she is for blood and that alone…” he walks to the room and opens the door. He walks in quietly and stands next to her as a vampire. He looks at her, sees how her hair lightly rests on the pillow, how her lips moves sweetly into a gorgeous smiles, how she lays sleeping so soundly as if she has nothing to worry about in the world. He stares at her neck, he leans down to bite then freezes, ‘I can’t do this…I love her…” he stands up with tears running down his face, a drop falls on her face and she slowly opens her eyes, he looks at her lovely eyes, see a deep blue, and sees how it sparkles like starts in a dark deep blue sky.
She looks and sees a vampire and doesn’t know its Luis. She screams, “OMG, OMG!!! AHH!! Luis!!! Help!!!” she screams louder, Luis then replies, “Beth wait stop…its me…I didn’t want you to know…I love you…but it doesn’t matter now…you already know what I am…” he leaves the room and slams the door. She gets up and runs to the door, “Luis wait!” she holds him close, “please don’t go…I don’t care what you are, I love you 2” tears run down her face, he turns around and wipes them off, “Beth…about earlier…you need to know…come sit down…”, he goes with her and sits down on the couch, “the girl…I-I loved her a lot…she meant the world to me…we feel in love, but something happened, she asked me to make her a vampire so we can be together forever…so I agreed…but…instead of being a vampire she died…I lost my love…and it was my fault…”, he starts to cry and she holds him, “Luis…shh, stop crying….I’m here for you…I always will be…” she thinks to herself (I better not ask him something like that…he went through a lot more than I did…all what happened to me was my bf cheated with me…but this poor thing…he has been to hell and back), she says, “Luis…come with me, stay with me tonight, I want you to hold me till the next night…” he replies, “ok…but please don’t ask for me to bite you…please don’t…” she holds him closer, “I wont, I will never ask you that, now come on…keep me safe” she takes him back to the room and they lay down on the bed, she then says, “Luis…”, he replies, “y-yes…” she asks, “kiss me…” he leans over and kisses her, they start to kiss. They fall asleep with Beth in Luis’s arms. The next night Beth gets up and cuddles with him, “Luis…I want to stay with you…and live forever with you…so please I ask you this because I want to be together forever…” he gets up and gets off the bed, “I wont…I’m not going to…”, she answers back, “Luis please…” she grabs him, “I want to…just a little bite…right here”, she puts her hand on her neck and he legs go of her, “you promised…” he cries a little, she pulls him on the bed, “I know what will make you”, she smiles and kisses him, “Beth…please…I’m not going to…”, she stops, “ok fine…well at least marry me…so that we are together forever…” he smiles, “yes, we are going to get married and we will spend the rest of our lives together…” she smiles and says, “good…now…is there something you want to do right now?” she winks and kisses him, he replies, “ah…there is something”, he starts to French kiss with her. After about an hour, they decide to go and get married the next night, so they stay together holding each other in there sleep. The next night, they go to get married with Luis in his human form. After the wedding they go back to the house. 3 years after the wedding Beth and Luis had a little girl named Sabrina who was half vampire, and they lived together in the same little house in the forest.


THE END

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