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Stiches chapters
thes are the previous chapters of my new small book ' stitches' that are taken off my page because a new chapter was added. also i will have author notes for each section.
stitches capter two." I can't be seeing this"
"there's something i thought i'd never see.." I said as i sat on Mary's bed. she usually never sleeps in. unfortunately i managed
.to wake her. oh boy.. "Dan is that you?" she asked " im the only person beside you living here.." i said, playing with her brown, chocolaty hair..
"of course its me" i added before i lost myself. "oh" she said then sighed. " I'm tired" she said. " i can see that" i answered then smiled.she looked
up and smiled back. good, at least we're together for this. i didnt have anything to do this morning so i layed on the bed with her. I can see why
she chose this room. nice..soft..bed... i yawned. then drifted into either a dream-like stupor or into sleep. but i awoke to find she was playing with my
hair, as i was playing with hers before. " i really dont like that you died your hair black" she said then frowned." i know" i said" you've told me a hundred
times". i sighed and climbed out of bed. "how long was i asleep?" i asked her. "umm..i think an hour" she said. holy crap.. an hour..
i sighed, then walked back to my room to change out of my pajama's. unexpectedly, mary came knocking at my door. unfortunately the door
can be very easily opened.. and the door fell open and as she fell in the room, i quickly pulled my pants back up. embarassing.. " you need to get that
door fixed" she said. "hmmhmm" i mumbled. i didnt really feel like talking much right now. " what do you want?" i asked."oh, i just wanted to see if you
wanted something to eat. it's ten 'o' clock." she said. "umm sure, pancakes would be nice" i added. she usually never asks if i want anything for breakfast,
and i was hungry. "okay" she answered as she left the room as her night gown swept across the door frame.
i really like that night gown on her, i'm glad i bought it for her. she does seem to like it. then i finally got changed into some normal cloathes.
unfortunately mary didn't. "oh" she said" i didnt know you were changing" she added." sorry.." i added. when breakfast was done cooking i sat on the couch
eating my pancakes. hmm, blueberries. then she came into the living room and sat next to me. " do you like them?" she asked " yea they're great." i said through
a mouthful of pankakes. she then layed on my lap. wait. she only does this when she wants me to.." stay home..." i said unconciously. she looked up at me, "what?"
she said. "you want me to stay home...today.." i said. apparently i was on to her scheme. " yea i do." she replied. i then sighed and resigned my fate for the day.
when mary wants something, she pulls out all the stops to get it.

later that night i woke up next to mary, in her bed. " what the?...." i asked dazed. i looked over at the clock and notice that it was 11: 19 at night
I then went back to my room and then went back to bed. i awoke again only by a scream, not of fear, but of shock. apparently mary knew what went on last night.
i have this amnesia thing where i can remember things that happen really fast. then mary ran into my room, and then gave a sigh of releif. " i thought you left me.."
she said. "mare" i said. " i would never leave you. i love you too much, and im too attached." i added. " if your the last person i spend time with, then i'm happy."
a big smile came to her face when i said that. she always loves it when im sweet. " oh" she said" okay then. i love you too.." she said as she sat on my bed next to me.
"well, i guess i have to go out today" i said. she then stared at me like i had three heads. i broke through the hardened mask that was her smile.


look, i know that chapter two seems shorter than chapter one, but look i had like 3 days to write it and i was busy, but chapter three will be uploded next week.

well, this chapter spent a little time to cover mary's love for dan, and just to see how she feels about his broken life. stare
yup, and also this was a short one but couldnt get into much detail.
also i worked out that the book will have twenty chapters, and im planning a sequel, so...yup.





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