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Twilightwolf10
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It Begins(cheers)
Well before I start writing the book I wish to tell you something: 1st: reality sucks XD so this is fantasy/fiction/whatever^^ 2nd:allot of the characters will be based off of ppl I know and love (well some that I just know ) 3rd: the characters are gay, because well I think you can guess.^^ 4th:yes the characters have Japanese names (if that’s a problem then get over it O:< but some names of things are just things I came up with so don’t start telling me that its gibberish ok!!!!!)But I have no idea where the heck they are XD (probably in some like different dimension reflecting our ^^) any who on to the story^^

CHAPTER 1: IT BEGINS(Revised)
Well our story begins with a boy named Koji Uromeshi. A sophomore in high school, Koji was fifteen. He had black hair with a blue-ish hue which was very hard to see especially in the dark. He was 5’8” and had a slim figure. But the thing about him that attracted everyone’s attention was that his eyes were as deep blue as the ocean. He was in 7th period. It had been the same boring routine that day: fist English class then math and on and on. Then the last period bell rang and Koji packed up and headed for home. The path home was actually quite lovely. Right beside the beach with the sun glimmering on the water and the cars going by on the other side of him, it was nice. While he was walking he heard a hysterical scream come from farther down the beach and people running in all directions trying to get away from the unseen threat. Koji had a bad feeling about this and rushed over to see what was going on. When he got there he saw a grey figure with red eyes, he looked like he was dead. The creature turned around and saw Koji. “Heh…heh….heh” he laughed menacingly. “Oh look a little pathetic human has come. Good I could use a little entertainment now that everyone has run away.” The creature slowly walked towards Koji and threw a ball of energy that went right past Koji’s head but he didn’t even flinch. “Ah ha! You’re a brave one aren’t you? Even though a human like you won’t last long this might be some fun.” Then the creature charged at Koji and struck the ground where he was. But just as he did this Koji flipped backwards effortlessly and landed softly on the beach sand. “So, you think I’m human do you? You demons always judge everything by its looks. I guess I’ll have to teach you not to do that.” “What did you say you little fool!” the demon said obviously angered by this remark. “I’ll teach you to speak to me that way!” Then the demon charged at Koji again. And once again Koji effortlessly dodged it. “So you wanna play? Fine by me.” Then the demon started to charge at Koji again but this time Koji did not move. As the demon got close Koji’s chest began to glow. He put his hands to his chest with his right index finger and left thumb touching and vice versa. “Let my own heart unlock! Za junsei mune michishio!” he said as he twisted his wrists so his fingers switched positions. Once he did this, Koji was engulfed in water. It swirled around him like it was trying to tear him apart and his figure disappeared. Then ,through the water, a blue light began to shine. Koji’s form was visible again in the swirling water as the water slower shrunk into a small circle that stopped at his neck in the form of a choker with a symbol of the moon cradling the ocean on it. Then a light appeared all around Koji and his shirt was transformed into a blue sleeveless vest with straps on the right arm. Then his pants where also transformed with a blue light into white slack type pants. Then in another flash of light he sprouted cat’s ears and a cat tail with blue fur. His hair had also turned blue just like his eyes which now looked like a cat’s. He had claws and a small fang that slipped over his lip. When everything had settled Koji had completely transformed. “Ha! Just because you transformed into a little kitty you think you can hurt me?” the demon said. “You’re dead!” He slammed his first down to attack but instead of it hitting sand something stopped it. Koji had stopped the demon’s mighty swing with barely any effort at all! The demon shocked by this jumped back abruptly and shouted “Little brat!” and he shot and energy ball. He smirked when it exploded and said “Shows him to mess with me”. But when the dust had cleared Koji was right in front of him with his hand close to the demon’s chest. “Mizu myaku!” Koji said and a stream of water shot through the demon at a high velocity. The demon fell backwards and landed with a thud on the ground. He slowly disenigrated. “Such a fool” Koji said as he transformed back into a human with a flash. Koji then got back on the hill beside the beach and began to walk the rest of the way home. Little did he know, that two mysterious figures were watching his battle. But with a flash the vanished into the light of the now setting sun. As police came to the beach to see what the disturbance was, Koji walked away calmly confident that they would find nothing thanks to the high tide. After he reached his house, a chalet on the beach, he immediately lay down on the couch and fell asleep. “So you think he’s the one?” one mysterious figure said to the other. “Yes.” The other replied. “There isn’t a doubt that he is the one we have been looking for…”

Well here it is the revised version of the first chapter. I think it’s a lot better since I have gained some writing skill over the past months. So leave comments plz and tell me what you think!


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