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Song :: Fantasy Kandiscope
Lyrics :: (Original) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0tYsXUspqNc&feature=youtu.be
Disc :: "The AfterBreak - The Lords" (Ending Theme)
Poem :: https://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=438343742849023


Note:: This rewrite focused on Syncing up with the melody... And Was 20% more based on the Poem.

=START=

Through The scent lingers,
Flowers scattered away.
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It Wouldn't-
even allow-
me to wander...

=Opening_Solo()=

Fresh,
out in their,
pure bloom.

It once Thought me;
"Living for sakes
its a painful sin"

We can't be parted (be parted)
and I can't be away from you.

These feelings, that I hold;
they only make my heart excited
(^Excitedv)

Flowers(^),
and their scent;
once, scattered away.

I can't wander (can't wander)
yet I came back (came back)
And so, I take a step back

It's so pure, It's dependable(^);
yet so weak, it can't be depend on.


The nightmare (this nightmare)
Carefully play (carefully plays)
all around me (vv)

=Repeat_Solo(Op_Solo)=

You; who knows weakness.
Forgive the desire of those;
who seek out on to using it.

That one instant moment;
where it bloomed beautifuly.

It might be to late to know;
But it is something that I must find out.

Once the scent,
and the flowers,
scattered away.

I want to chilishly (childishly)
entrust in you (trust in you)
Each and one of my memories.

I can't forgive,
you in this kindness.
Nor my wish
to monopolize.

The selfish love (selfish love)
that can't be compared (be compared)
one another

=Mid_Solo(Main)=

One day,
the flowers,
and their scent,
scattered away.

And these feelings (these feelings)
That spread away (spread away)
into one fragmental piece.

And you, Oh,
beloved heart;
be grief
yet be strong.

Like the merciless (merciless)
and yet sweet (yet sweet)
just like before....

=END=