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IcedAddiction
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Heres a story I wrote in English. Its about a dective called Reno Hitomi and a diamond has been stolen from a museum. Its not done yet but I'll write a continuation up. Heres goes nothing:

My Story


My name's Reno Hitomi. I pulled up outside of the Evelyn Museum. I stepped out of my black ferrari-which desperatly needed a clean. I got out of the car and banged the door shut and locked it.

I adjuted my black sunglasses and began to take big strides towards the aincient looking building. I entered the Museum. There was a small gathering of people where the stolen priceless diamond used to be. Froensics we're gathered around the cabient trying to look for clues.

The currator of the museum sped towards me looking relived. "Reno! Thank god your here!" Mr Nooge squeaked when he set his bulging eyes on me. Nooge, had a bizzare walrus like apperance. He had the typical thick moustache and the hude round humoungus stomach.

I studied Nooge feeling uneasy. Something about him...Seemed sinster. I took a deep breath after a few seconds of thought. "Nooge Im going upstairs to look ar--" I started but stupid old man Nooge grabbed my black leather trench coat with his stubby fingers. Nooge looked up at me smiling at me sheepishly. "D-dont why not enjoy a spot of tea and chocolate digestives with me?" he stammered.

I sighed and threw a glare at Nooge. "Drinking tea with an old hasbeen isnt my job." I grunted.

To be continued...





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