Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

ILI ROD
Part 2 of (unnamed) Story
Lian fell in a useless attempt to get away from the grey wolf. Mack was within 5 feet of Lian as she howled and collapsed to the ground. Everything went to quickly for Lian to understand what happened until Ekib and Aren began yelling her name from behind her the forest. She spun around and smiled as her two friends ran out to the open. Ekib was holding a mysterious item as Lian got up from the dirt and brushed herself off. "What is that?" She asked Ekib. Not waiting for her response, she snatched the item and held it in her dirty hands. "It's a stun gun." Lian sighed, "So, he's going to be all right?" Ekib began to speak as a cohort of men rushed out of the forest carrying a large metal box. They ran over to Mack and removed a dart from her neck before placing her in the crate. "What's going to happen to her?!" Emotionally attached to every animal, Lian cried. "Don't worry Ma'am. We're not going to kill him." Aren heard a man mumble 'yet' but she didn't say anything, on behalf of Lain's weeping tears. TO BE CONTINUED.................


Author Comments::
The story continues! Fantastic. My friends love it but of course, I don't. I'm 14 and most stories by young people aren't very good, excluding Eragon and any others I don't know. (Eragon's book was good~Eragon's movie was bad, unless you didn't read the book then its good :Sweat smile





Frankly Frankie
Community Member
Frankly Frankie
Prev | Next»
Archive | Home

  • [01/30/07 09:10pm]
  • [01/30/07 09:08pm]
  •  
     
    Manage Your Items
    Other Stuff
    Get GCash
    Offers
    Get Items
    More Items
    Where Everyone Hangs Out
    Other Community Areas
    Virtual Spaces
    Fun Stuff
    Gaia's Games
    Mini-Games
    Play with GCash
    Play with Platinum