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The life and times of Kitsune Kandie
Me, breifing my stories and such..
Stunned Dream: Just a little something i wrote...
MY STORY: Shattered DREAM
Well here we go....

Stunned Dream-Draft #1 Chapter 1

All I remember was the sudden roar of the engine then an explosion and nothing. All that memory was a blur after that. All I felt was the impact and pain then nothing…not even breathing, not even moving. Just the feeling of it and the pain of it was all a blur and a motionless dream and sudden movement. It has been my 14th birthday and my father was taking me to… a place far away with my best friend… I don’t remember where but I knew it was somewhere… I wanted to go, my whole life. The screams and the shouts the crash-landing … nothing. All of these distant memories were the found fragments of my shattered dream. I feel like I’m standing in a white area. Nothing. Like I have been cut out of the world and now I am no longer part of it. What would happen? Am I alive? Am I dead? What happened on that trip to this destiny?

Arriving Chapter 2

I don’t know where I am or where I’m headed. I feel lost without a map, not a clue where I am or where I’m going. Almost walking in a complete straight line not speeding up not slowing down just… walking. In this walk trying to find the ending to this path-leading nowhere. As I looked longingly up ahead I caught a glimpse of light as I approached it got so bright piercing my eyes but stinging my own very soul. As I got close I saw a heavenly figure with feathery wings and a white aura touching and piercing your body and soul as approaching the magnificent figure, golden locks curled around the shoulders and a bright white and gold tunic with a gold sash that went down to foot length were upon the… angel and there was another...thing there but different it was demonic, red dragon wings and a sly devil tail outstretched and curled on the top of the pedestal on which both figures where seated upon. I headed toward the two pedestals standing before them both, loving the angel but hating that monster that could strike any minute. I knew what this was … in church we had talked about this before you die you go to judgment which two figures grant your approval to go through to the golden gates of heaven… but is this it… is this her judgment?

Judgement Chapter 3


((this is all i got so far i will add more! I WANT FEEDBACK))






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RosalieCullen in twilight
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commentCommented on: Tue May 08, 2007 @ 11:28pm
that is a really good part of a story good job!


commentCommented on: Sun May 13, 2007 @ 02:03pm
i betcha already know i know that you know that i like it.



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