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In here I'll mostly post my poems and maybe a few short fanfics. Or if i'm feeling bitchy I'll rant in here and just ignore those so yeah. Most of my poems are dark and sometimes angsty and if you don't like that kind don't read 'em.
Love Or Death?(a poem)
Okay this is a really dark and sad poem. So if you're fain-hearted I advise you not to read this. Um please comment and tell me what you think, I'd really like the feedback!

A gasp erupts

From my dry mouth

As my heart clenches in want

The want, the need to be with him.


I cry myself to sleep every night

As the pain in my heart dulls

For the pain I inflict

On myself.


My life

That had been hell

Has finally gotten so bad

That I am driven to this.



My only comfort:

A blade and a voice

The blade offers freedom from this world

While the voice keeps me here and comforts me, loves me, cares about me.


As metal tears through flesh

I cry rivers of sadness, of blood

Not knowing what choice to make



Leave this world and pain behind

Or stay with him and make it through this pain

I don't know what choice to make

or what to do



As bright crimson blood

runs down my arm in streams

I cry in pain and sadness

knowing that this could take me away from what could help me.


It could take me away

from a gentle hand

and soothing voice

that could save me from my painful fate.





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    ayoura
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 09:04pm
    the colour detracts for m the peom just a thought there


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