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A RANDOM STORY - PLZ READ AN REPLY
In a place where everyone has a secret…
The only thing more dangerous then the lies…
Is the truth…


Whoosh! Splash! She felt the wind in her hair and the sand at her feet roll away as the waved gathered it up and swallowed the small bits into a vast ocean. She sat there, staring at the open sea, and sighed. She heard her name being called. She looked left, then right, but nothing was in sight. Or rather, no one. She shivered from the wind amd glanced down. She heard her name being called yet again. “Hello?” she called. No answer. “Hello?” she called again. Still no answer. She sighed, thinking it was probably her imagination, or better yet, the wind. Splash! She jumped as a dark figure came towards her. “W-who are you?” she asked. The figure sat next to her. She turned her head to get a better view of the figure but it had vanished. She looked down beside her to see a message engraved in the sand.
What’s more is less; what’s less is more.
As if that explained anything. She sighed as she got up. Well, tried to. As she went to stand up, her legs felt heavy and she fell down. She then noticed that she was moving. She looked at the sand and saw it rushing past her. She gasped as she realized that she was being pulled into the water! She struggled to get out but she heard a voice. The same voice that had said her name. But this time, the voice was beckoning her, telling her not to be afraid. Yeah right. Like she was going to stop struggling and listen to that voice. She struggled harder, only making things worse as the ocean continued to user her as the object to face its wrath. She tried to cry out for help, but she couldn’t speak and kept getting water in her mouth. She then saw the figure watching her, sitting where she had sat. She tried to signal to it but it just stared at her. She tried to yell out, to do anything but it was of no use. She just couldn’t escape the ocean. She tried to wave at the figure in a last attempt before she drowned completely.






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-SOUR-SKITTLES-ASSASSIN-
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 10, 2007 @ 10:21pm
that story is kinda sad but i feel there is some sort of meaning behind it


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 09:20pm
Cool! You must continue. I beg of you!



Lufuu
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athena08
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 12:40am
WOW...... are you going to continue it???? or is that the end?


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 01:48am
Not bad! Creepy, too. Reminds me of the movie I saw today. I didn't understand about the message in the sand, though, did I miss something? It seemed really important.



Almsivi
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-StRAwbERrY VaNiLLa LoVE-
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 07, 2007 @ 10:45pm
its sounds familiar.... im mean ur writing of course not the story
it was good though me likie


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 11, 2007 @ 03:29pm
WOW! your a good writer but never read this at night pretty creepy but nice job!



TheAceDude
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Shadow0035
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 07:05pm
wow ur a good writer lol heart


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