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love why is that four letter word so painful when i wake in the night after having a dream of you.. is that what it is? why is it that this four letter word has so much power over me like a doll i hed to it will and bow to its words is that love??... why is it i dont question it fight it destroy it is that its power?? i find myself going out of my way to see you and out of my mind to think of you and losing my self over you why does the this word call your name and how does your touch still burn though the days and why do i still frezze for a kiss thats gone why does the the dance floor of gym room still warm my heart why do i dream of that one night that one kiss that one answer why do i find myself trying to replace the hole you left with others why cant someone else fill this void why does no other touch burn like yours did that night?? why does that sunset shout to me ive lost a treasure why do the movies whisper that theres still one seat open and why do my poems write out pain instead of love why do the stands in a game seem so empty why do nights seem so much darker and why does love.... not exist... is this love..

Posted by: dragonfang122 Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 04:28am

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Commented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 11:50am


	Aaaawww, why can't I write as good as you do? crying

Commented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 12:05pm


	hey..im sorry if your in pain in anyway..i love this poem, but i worry about you..you dont have to talk, but im here if you need a friend.

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Commented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 07:56pm


	but in my world of lost love and found pain i must mack a last stand to live not lie to see and not be blinded in the end the cold of this world will reach me through and throught but for now i stand and hide it behind a smile walk with no real felling so untill the end i'll take a stand and fight for my life ~with love britt

Commented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 05:22pm


	nice poem biggrin

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Commented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 01:41am


	sounds like you got hurt very painfully. im sorry

Commented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 02:09am


	this one is one that really gets me!

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Commented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 06:03am


	All ur poems are pretty good, but i didn't like this one as much as the last one u wrote. And i'm sry if this sounded too harsh but u and i r pretty honest with each other so i thought i'd give u my honest opinion, i'm also sry that ur feeling so much pain over her ... wow i wonder how much longer i can ramble on like this...ok i think i'm done for now ,hmm i wonder if anyone else will read my comment...ok now i'm done. ... ninja NINJA!!!!

Commented on: Fri Jun 29, 2007 @ 09:28pm


	well at least i understand the filling and i hope its me lol im just playin heart

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Commented on: Sun Aug 12, 2007 @ 02:42am


	ur making me cry..... y do all ur poems have 2 b so sad?????

Commented on: Tue Aug 14, 2007 @ 05:28pm


	Oh, sweetie, I just wanna hug you right now! sad

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Commented on: Mon Aug 20, 2007 @ 05:55am


	wow xd your good really good ... thats all i can say right now shocked.

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