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the true naruto :Hirashin no Naruto thunder god


Naruto looked at his so called teamates, cell 7 with hidden contempt,anger and strangly relief. 'Tch! look at them...fools, if only they knew '. Naruto thought as he spy Sakura,Sasuke and kakashi outside the village, his eyes narrowed as Sakura is ranting how good it is without the 'dobe' around. "b***h". He muttered.

"calm your self naruto" a demonic voice out of nowhere.

"he's right naruto" this time a mans voice.

Naruto ignore those voices then he took out a kunai, but it wasn't an ordinary kunai, this one is tri-tipped with kanji writing on thet taped handle and then Naruto flashed some complicated chains of handseals with speed that only jounin level shinobi can follow, disappeared in a flash of yellow.

The boy appearance and the not so quiet personality has makes other think of him as a pushover and those 'think' they know him will either in disgust,annoyance or as a grandson/older brother/little brother or a son figure.He is considered shorter then most kids at his age at 12, at stood least 4'9, he wears an orange jumpsuit and pants that seems too big for him and inside of all of that is a scrawny,malnorished body.He has tan skin, sunny blond hair,sky blue eyes and whisker like marks with 3 horizontal lines on each cheek.

The said boy is now standing in his broken down apartment, it was suprisingly clean but spells like a mixture of ramen. rotten milk and...old.

He reached is room and plopped down on his bed, relishing the comfort it gave him.

"Arashi, Kyuubi tell me,do you think im strong enough for the exams?". Yes thats right Kazama Arashi A,K.A "4th Hokage" and "Konoha's yellow flash" is within Naruto and also the legendary Kyubi no kitsune as well.

"Hmmmmmm" replied the legendary man and legendary beast "we'll tell after your bed time," they answered.

"WHAT!?" the demon vessel exclaimed "I'M NOT EVEN TI-," and eyes eyes began to droop and every part of his body sreams tired!

and with that his head fell on the pillows and instantly falled asleep.

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"Narutooooooooo...waaaaake uuuuup..."

"Waaaaake up Narutoooo..."

"..."no responce

"...sigh..."

..."DAMN IT!!, WAKE YOU HUMAN FLESH BAG!! W.A.K.E U.P WAKE UP!!!!!"

Naruto bolted on the other side of his bed... "AAAaHHHH...!!!!" and landed on his head "!OOOOOWW"!! he cried, and after a minute he calm down...and exploded again "DAMN IT KYU-TEME!! YOU COULD'VE GIVIN ME A CONCUSSION!!" He screamed.

The magnificent beast roared with laughter.Yondaime with having a concerned face, while his mind is saying."take that you little punk! Thats for tying me up on a pole while your eating MY storage of ramen!!". cackled chibi Yondaime said while slapping the bottom of chibi Naruto's butt.

"Aaaarg whatever after i get a leak, then i'm going to eat to the ramen bar(!), "he said to his mental/soul neighbors and left for the bathroom, drowning out the voices of his Father and the kitsune but not untill he stopped to look at his alarm clock,

'hmmmmm, 6:32 huh? finaly in a half an hour i'll finaly do my reguler training shedule since i joined team 7' naruto with a scowl at thought of his teamates.

Naruto was not who he seems,in his giddy loud personal was nothing but mask,a disguise to protect him from true danger, and it all started when Naruto was 6.

FLASHBACK!

6 year old wanted was to play with other kids, sandaime ojji was too busy and warned naruto to not go out of his apartment, but of coarse naruto as an innocant naive 6 year old did not heed his warnings and sneaked out, as he walks by the Konoha streets ,he feel THOSE emotions around him again

RAGE

HATE

DISGUST

FEAR

Naruto shivered, why do they always do this? it felt as though the villigers has injected more then 10 timestheir usual hate toword him, he was so much in thought he bumped into someone and recoiled to the ground "I-i-im s-sorry mi-mister". and then next thing he knew he felt the air left out of him when the same person he bumped into slammed a hard blow to the gut "you damned demon! you try to take my money and attack me!?"

naruto was on the ground whimpering "n-no i was'n-"" but he was cut off by "HEY THIS MONSTER IS STARTING TO SHOW HIS TRUE COLORS!!" the man the shouted/screamed as he was holding his arm as if he is in pain, the villigers.turn their head to see a child on the ground and scowled to reconized 'kyuubi brat.' "He injured that man! no 6 year old child should have this kind of streangh!!". random villiger "he must be finished off NOW" soon a mob was formed around naruto, who felt somehow feels as if he should run,but failed to make a step after he felt a sharp pain and blacked out.

Drip

drip

drip

the noise echoed through Naruto's ears and with a groan he got up "wh-where am i?" he squeaked out, he looked around and he noticed something was wet and looked down,there was ankle height water around him and the walls were covered up with pipes and it was neither bright nor dark, nauto whimpered at sudden memory of how he got here and clutched his head as if something was going to hit him but froze when someone or SOMETHING spoke.

"Sssoooooo...huuuuungrrry," an demonic voice echoed, it felt so powerful and so commanding, Naruto felt himself walking forword the source of the voice. a mans voice out of no where.demonlike voice slowly as if were to imitate a ghost. the man again."OH, well you should of said so instead of screaming my name," thesamedemonic voice, but without sounding like a creepy long ghost moaning.

Naruto winced at the sound of hair ripping and a roar of frusteration from a man, he peaked around the corner to see a giant gate with a rectangle piece of paper "sealed" that seems to holds the gate and Naruto stared farther to see a large moving object and for the first time when he woke in the chamber, felt a rush of raging killer intent washed over him, nothing has he ever felt in his short life ...

"Arashi! somones here!!"

...and naruto barely in time to see a flash of yellow and find himself pinned to the hard ground.

He felt a cold object on his neck and turned to see cold yet familar blue eyes turn to shock and reconize naruto's own scared shell shocked blue. "Y-y-y-you!!!!".the stranger. Naruto felt strong arms circled around him and closed his eyes shut thinking he was going to squeeze him to death,,,.But there was no sound of his bones crushing nor the sound of his own mouth open to scream in pain.

Instead only to find warmth in the hands of a stranger and the sound of...crying?

And the next moments or rather words, turn naruto world upside down.

"i finaly meet you again...sob...my son.

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Numb,shock and creeped out...was all naruto felt at the moment, here he was being hugged by a crying stranger.

he slowly turn his head to see a large mop of sunny blond hair that mirrors his own but longer and spikier, his face was buried in the crook of his neck and Naruto can feel wetness on his shoulder and the sobbing was muffled but still loud like Sakura with a bad hair day.

After three minutes that seemes to be an eternity of them, the man got up and stared at Naruto through his watery yet calm blue eyes, the mini lookalike stared back and noticed the man''s features.

'He's tall', was all naruto can say in his mind, he also took noticed that the man is wearing a black shinobi pants, blue shinobi sandals, he looked up to see his waist anfd torso, a green jounin outfit and a sleevless white coat with red flames on the bottem of the coat and naruto arched his head to see the mans face.He has blue eyes that resembles his own and shaggy shoulder lenght blond hair that also resembles his own, his tan means he probaly out in the sun a lot and on a hiate leaf headband that stood proudly on is forhead.

Naruto began to speak "w-who are you?" he asked, the man looked stricken.

"Me!? I'm Kamama Arashi!! The 4th hokage!! your Father!! don't you know your own father!?" The man named Kazama Arashi in a hopefull voice and looked at Naruto.

But Naruto just felt like he just died when he said "your Father" and his eyes rolled up and fainted.

FLASHBACK END!

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He reached his destination and decided to look in the mirror to see a face of a chubby 12 year old boy,tan skin and all, blue eyes with one eyelid threatening to droop, his blond spiky hair is ruffled even more then usual and 3 lines on his cheeks to resemble whiskers.

Naruto stared at his reflection and muttered "kai", with a small poof clouds engulfed the boy.

Soon the clouds faded and the boy replaced by a slightly different looking boy appeared.

He was only in his boxers and was no longer a stood 4'9, but now 5'5 and he had a body that 12-16 year old boys would kill, he was well built,tan and had a face that can make Sasuke make a run for his money, his eyes are more narrowed and his bright,happy blue eyes are replaced by a cold,fierce,intense electric blue, his hair sunny blond was no longer spiky and mid short, but now it was waist lenght with many long bangs hanging down his face, giving him a dark, sexy "wow he's hot/cute/gorgous" look. (think of Envy from Fullmetal Alchimist but thicker"fuller" and same sunny blond color )

"Aaaaaaaahhh". he sighed "this is how i should be-,,,"

"CREEEEEK" he heard the door to his house open

Naruto's eyes widen in panic and his heart was thumping hard through his chest.

'what!? who would be at my house at this time!? it can't be those villiger can it!!?'

and what seemed to be minutes the bathroom door opened and reveal...

I KNOW CLIFF HANGER IM AN a** FOR IT WELL READ AND COMMENT PART TWO






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A Cherub In The Heavenly
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 05:30am
*glares* I wish I could write like you


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 11:31pm
I only skimmed, but nice work...



Madam Nana
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