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"CREEEEEK" he heard the door to his house open

Naruto's eyes widen in panic and his heart was thumping hard through his chest.

'what!? who would be at my house at this time!? it can't be those villiger can it!!?'

and what seemed to be minutes the bathroom door opened and reveal...

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chapter two: Stranger

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"CREEEEEK" he heard the door to his house open

Naruto's eyes widen in panic and his heart was thumping hard through his chest.

'what!? who would be at my house at this time!? it can't be those villiger can it!!?'

and what seemed to be minutes the bathroom door opened and reveal...nothing?

Naruto facefaulted, and got up to see no one was there, he telaported to the living room where the noise just started, only to see the door open and the cause of it,

a hooded figure with a rather large sword, this person was wearing a faded grey cloak that covered the person's entire body so that nobody can tell wether or not he/she was a boy or girl, the said person was taller the him and stood at least 5'8 or 5'9 and who was now looking at the Adonis-like boy in front of him/her.

"Are you Uzumaki Naruto?" The stranger said what seems to be a mans voice and Naruto noticed that the voice seems to be rasped out, as if he was holding his breath when he saw him telaported here.

"eer...yes i am," Naruto replies, calm faced, but his body was warning the stranger he was tense as if he were to dare him to strike and trying to hold the blush that was threatening to show, because he was in his boxers,unarmed and without his "dobe" appearance, he felt naked, but tensed even more when the cloaked figure was silent for minute then his hand reached into his cloak to pull out...a small scroll?

And to be even more bizzare he dropped the scroll onto the ground and shunshin out of the room with a mist.

Naruto was still stiff and on guard, searched for the stranger's pressence until he decided he was gone.

With a sigh, he picked up the scroll that the cloaked man purposly dropped and opened the scroll slowly just in case of an ambush, only to find a letter in side the scroll and read

'Dear Uzumaki Naruto, the chunin exams are coming in two weeks' (Naruto rolls his eyes) "well duh!" he resumed reading. 'I know you are and your little charade' (at this Naruto's eyes widen) 'and im impressed, how you could keep this up for so long not even your teamates' (Naruto scowled) teamates!? HA! 'remember this, watch your back.' At this Naruto reread the letter a couple times and cloed the scroll.

'I know you are and your little charade' the words echoed through his head 'charade? watch my back? is this guy stalking me or something? he not a child molester is he? He shuddered at the thought of him simply walking by the ally, watching his back every five seconds for a sigh of a stalker waiting just to...

He stopped thinking of these thoughts and once again started to do what he planned...tor-err TRAINING FROM YONDAIME AND KYUUBI!!

He contacted with those two by meditating...,and pushing out thoughts of a cloaked child molester.

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Meanwhile, on the top of the stone head of Sandaime,was the cloaked figure who took off his hood and looked at far away at konoha,

gone with the hood that was hiding his face was a young women at an age of 15 or less and by Kami, she was beautiful even with a small blush on her face!.

'my god! that was Naruto!? MY NARU-CHAN!? He was so cute back then, and now he looks so godlike!

Her blushing face now rivals Hinata's but slowly receded and has a frown on her face.

' But it seems like i won't be seeing him again untill the chunin exams' she thought and with that, shunshined from Konoha's borders.(1) what was the name of the jutsu kakashi or other jounins used to telaport?)

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Back to Naruto, who was now facefaulted in his mind, because he saw his dear father pelting his nine tailed sensei with shogi pieces

"you must have cheated!! there is no way i could've lost like that" screamed a very pissed off blonde hokage

"because your a loser Arashi!" screamed back a very pissed off fox demon.

Naruto swaetdropped and wondered why he ever meet these two and then he remembered what happened THAT day

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FLASHBACK!!

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6 year old wanted was to play with other kids, sandaime ojji was too busy and warned naruto to not go out of his apartment, but of coarse naruto as an innocant naive 6 year old did not heed his warnings and sneaked out, as he walks by the Konoha streets ,he feel THOSE emotions around him again

RAGE

HATE

DISGUST

FEAR

Naruto shivered, why do they always do this? it felt as though the villigers has injected more then 10 timestheir usual hate toword him, he was so much in thought he bumped into someone and recoiled to the ground "I-i-im s-sorry mi-mister". and then next thing he knew he felt the air left out of him when the same person he bumped into slammed a hard blow to the gut "you damned demon! you try to take my money and attack me!?"

naruto was on the ground whimpering "n-no i was'n-"" but he was cut off by "HEY THIS MONSTER IS STARTING TO SHOW HIS TRUE COLORS!!" the man the shouted/screamed as he was holding his arm as if he is in pain, the villigers.turn their head to see a child on the ground and scowled to reconized 'kyuubi brat.' "He injured that man! no 6 year old child should have this kind of streangh!!". random villiger "he must be finished off NOW" soon a mob was formed around naruto, who felt somehow feels as if he should run,but failed to make a step after he felt a sharp pain and blacked out.

Drip

drip

drip

the noise echoed through Naruto's ears and with a groan he got up "wh-where am i?" he squeaked out, he looked around and he noticed something was wet and looked down,there was ankle height water around him and the walls were covered up with pipes and it was neither bright nor dark, nauto whimpered at sudden memory of how he got here and clutched his head as if something was going to hit him but froze when someone or SOMETHING spoke.

"Sssoooooo...huuuuungrrry," an demonic voice echoed, it felt so powerful and so commanding, Naruto felt himself walking forword the source of the voice. a mans voice out of no where.demonlike voice slowly as if were to imitate a ghost. the man again."OH, well you should of said so instead of screaming my name," thesamedemonic voice, but without sounding like a creepy long ghost moaning.

Naruto winced at the sound of hair ripping and a roar of frusteration from a man, he peaked around the corner to see a giant gate with a rectangle piece of paper "sealed" that seems to holds the gate and Naruto stared farther to see a large moving object and for the first time when he woke in the chamber, felt a rush of raging killer intent washed over him, nothing has he ever felt in his short life ...

"Arashi! somones here!!"

...and naruto barely in time to see a flash of yellow and find himself pinned to the hard ground.

He felt a cold object on his neck and turned to see cold yet familar blue eyes turn to shock and reconize naruto's own scared shell shocked blue. "Y-y-y-you!!!!".the stranger. Naruto felt strong arms circled around him and closed his eyes shut thinking he was going to squeeze him to death,,,.But there was no sound of his bones crushing nor the sound of his own mouth open to scream in pain.

Instead only to find warmth in the hands of a stranger and the sound of...crying?

And the next moments or rather words, turn naruto world upside down.

"i finaly meet you again...sob...my son.

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Numb,shock and creeped out...was all naruto felt at the moment, here he was being hugged by a crying stranger.

he slowly turn his head to see a large mop of sunny blond hair that mirrors his own but longer and spikier, his face was buried in the crook of his neck and Naruto can feel wetness on his shoulder and the sobbing was muffled but still loud like Sakura with a bad hair day.

After three minutes that seemes to be an eternity of them, the man got up and stared at Naruto through his watery yet calm blue eyes, the mini lookalike stared back and noticed the man''s features.

'He's tall', was all naruto can say in his mind, he also took noticed that the man is wearing a black shinobi pants, blue shinobi sandals, he looked up to see his waist anfd torso, a green jounin outfit and a sleevless white coat with red flames on the bottem of the coat and naruto arched his head to see the mans face.He has blue eyes that resembles his own and shaggy shoulder lenght blond hair, even the hair color also resembles his own!, his tan means he probaly out in the sun a lot and on a hiate leaf headband that stood proudly on his forhead.

Naruto began to speak "w-who are you?" he asked, the man looked stricken.

"Me!? I'm Kamama Arashi!! The 4th hokage!! your Father!! don't you know your own father!?" The man named Kazama Arashi in a hopefull voice and looked at Naruto.

But Naruto just felt like he just died when he said "your Father" and his eyes rolled up and fainted.

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FLASHBACK END!

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"oh yeah i rememer now..." Naruto thought as he got up.

"ALRIGHT!! YOU TWO GENTLMENS!! IT'S TIME TO TRAIN ME!!" he shouted to the 'gentlemens' who were still screaming yelling and pelting shogi pieces at each other for another... 3 seconds until Naruto had enough and grabbed a handfull of of his own shogi pieces at them, which resultd both Arashi and kyuubi to face him.

"Now that i got your attention...IT"S TIME FOR MY TRAINING!!!!" He screamed but not before he put a smug look on his handsome face.

Arashi and kyuubi stared at him for a full minute, then they stared at each other, then looked back at Naruto again with a creepy smile on thier faces and what they said made Naruto regret asking for training from these two.

"fiiiiiiiiine" they said slowly and if possible, they're smile turned even creepier " we will begin your worst tortur-eer we mean your intense training...starting...NOW!!

Naruto's face was priceless .

..."NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!..."

And if it wasn't for the sound resistance jutsu enchanted walls, all of Konohagakure would hear the scream that reached to Otogakure


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A Cherub In The Heavenly
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 05:23am
That's pretty cool. BUt I bett read the first part. HUh?


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 05:32am
its undr it



jinkumabuta
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A Cherub In The Heavenly
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 01:28pm
I knew that... Hehhe


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