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My poems.
Drip
Lost in your own world,
No one seems to care,
So much to think about,
And yet so little time,
Staring, straight at a wall,
Disappearing in a ball,
Falling down,
Hit the ground and start running,
Flat out running,
From nothing,
And everything at the same time,
All the darkness around,
Water dipping without a sound,
Into a small hole,
No light around,
No time for pity,
Trip and fall,
The crack of lighting,
And blood pouring down,
With one drop left,
And nothing to show,
And when no light comes,
You realize it was all for nothing.






User Comments: [2]
[.Living Color.]
Community Member





Mon May 02, 2005 @ 01:18pm


In my opinion, your poem has some real feeling into it. It's nice. 3nodding


Der Fuhrer Manders
Community Member





Mon May 02, 2005 @ 10:14pm


^Thanks! I love all the support you guys give me!!!!!!!!!!!!


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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