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I'm Sorry I'm sorry we rarely saw you, Throughout the years to come. But now it's way too late, You beautiful life is done. I'm sorry for my insults, I layed apon your name. And now I feel regret For putting your name in vain. I'm sorry throughout it all, I could never see, That though we barely spoke, You mean so much to me. And... I'm sorry for one special thing, That day I learned you passed by. I am so sorry, That I just couldn't cry. I'm sorry I wasn't there, To give you one happy sight, You were all alone when, Your soul was brought to light. I'm sorry you never saw me, When I kissed you goodnight. I prayed and cried my eyes out, Because, Yai Yai, I'm sorry, you died.

Posted by: Ithidan Mon Jul 16, 2007 @ 06:21am

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kitonbi
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Commented on: Mon Jul 16, 2007 @ 06:31am


	I luvered it. It was sad, but it was very good. I wish I was as good with poems as I am with drawing. Wait... Let me guess the rhyme pattern thingy... ABCB? Something like that...

Commented on: Mon Jul 16, 2007 @ 06:33am


	Holy st that's good. heart I can't even right like that sweatdrop**

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Commented on: Mon Jul 16, 2007 @ 06:34am


	judging by your grammar cough lol XD. also yes it is abcb.

Commented on: Mon Jul 16, 2007 @ 08:08pm


	I guessed right. Do I get a cookie now? -shrugs- I'll get a cookie from someone, but I don't know who... And who're talking to about their grammar?

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Commented on: Fri Jul 20, 2007 @ 04:17pm


	I agree, it's really good! But it's really sad too... crying crying crying It reminds me of my uncle, and it's such a sad poem!!!! crying Oh, and who's Yai Yai?

Commented on: Sun Jul 22, 2007 @ 03:56am


	greek for grandma. didnt wanna put that after the poem

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Roses Are Red x3
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Commented on: Sat Aug 04, 2007 @ 02:09am


	You shouldn't be sorry that your grandma died, because it really isn't your fault.. And though you could have spent more time with her... there are people who never spend anytime with a loved one before they die. At least you got to spend some time with her, make the best of those memories, and remember that your grandma loved you very much and if she were still alive she would have loved to read this poem. I feel like this is what I'm going through right now.. my grandma is dieing.. and she is too sick for me to go visit her now... if I had taken the chance to visit her before she had gotten too ill.. maybe I would feel differently.

Commented on: Sat Aug 04, 2007 @ 02:31am


	you misunderstand. Im upset she's dead but there is more to it then just her dying.....

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Commented on: Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 04:08pm


	Sorry if it sounds like I don't understand.. I know there is more to this poem than just her death, I know she must have meant a lot to you, but I don't know everything, and that can't be helped.

Commented on: Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 04:15pm

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