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My love journal
Feelings that comes from the heart most made by friends and love Most of just life it self
Soul of a Feather (plz do tell me what u think)
You poor soul i want to save you
my soul is just like a feather in my memoeries
That flys through out my body to keep me there for a reason
yet shines like the moon and the stars that shines so bright at night
thats feather is the life and more beon compear
through out someones soul thats what it is yet it goes through the mined to keep the memories there all the time to keep a life there and intack
with out that feather that life is lost forever
and thats what it was being held in is just a empy shell in darkness
That Feather is a life one soul a memory that flows throw out the body
to keep the life going...






User Comments: [8]
RipOutYourSoul
Community Member





Mon Jul 23, 2007 @ 08:48am


# 1 that is very good i mean very very good. very good wording you used
# 2 it makes a very good description it really does. It describes very well.
# 3 i understand it all pretty much i can think of my life and everything and read that and i understand it pretty well.


Irishconner
Community Member





Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 05:48am


Its wonderfull....its very easy to understand like she said above and I also think that it comes from the heart which is a very beautifull thing to do so bravo ^^


aj forever on who cares
Community Member





Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 06:28am


its as cool as u and thats very


TheNextSpartan
Community Member





Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 09:17am


thats very good, nice wording and the overall way its presented nice!!


XHost_Hikaru_ClubX
Community Member





Sun Jul 29, 2007 @ 05:07am


I'm not even great at poems, but i loved them and these are one of them. whee


Ohana Yahano
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Wed Aug 01, 2007 @ 02:47am


cool poem ren. mrgreen


aj forever on who cares
Community Member





Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 03:05pm


king waffle says good job ren


kucu_109
Community Member





Fri Aug 10, 2007 @ 05:30am


# 1 that is very good i mean very very good. very good wording you used
# 2 it makes a very good description it really does. It describes very well.
# 3 i understand it all pretty much i can think of my life and everything and read that and i understand it pretty well.


User Comments: [8]
 
 
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