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It's about whatever I feel like putting
my poem
oh dear love of mine
why do you make my life shine
my life is dark
but when i see you
it brightens up
from the depth of the netherworld
to the edge of the ocean
my life is tormented
with all the voices crying and pleading
for though i wish to help them
i am chained to these walls
but when i see you
your light melts these chains
i take hold of your hand
and we dance in the clouds
but then darkness falls
we are broken apart
we are sent to the opposite ends of the earth
and exiled from each other
i can no longer see you
i can no longer feel you hand
i can no longer hear your voice
i am lost
my knight, my king
please save me from this retchous fate
i will stay here and wait
i will wait forever in this sea of darkness
for my knight to once again carry me in his arms






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Pyrogirl420
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commentCommented on: Tue May 31, 2005 @ 11:59pm
Yeah! The Pika Has spoken!! 3nodding


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 01, 2005 @ 01:23am
i talk a lot too! mrgreen u think eh? hmmmmmmmmmm im not surprised frm wht i hear they are not very popular



Serj193
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Kendon
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 05:33pm
nice. i liked it. its kinda deep


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 06:14pm
I think this poem is pretty cool, you speak of love lost, I'm I wrong??? Well hopefully not, you're kind of young to be in that type of disposition...



MateusEA
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pikachu062191
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 06:24pm
im not in this position i was just bored


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 15, 2005 @ 06:15pm
Right you were jus bored. Riiight.



Kendamn
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