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You shall all perish if you don't subscribe to my journal
here is a poem i made i hope you like it
The memory's wiles are cruel. In its perversion, it binds our hearts firmly.

how do you like it give me any comments on how it sounds okay?






User Comments: [4]
smexy_kitsu1015
Community Member





Sun Sep 23, 2007 @ 10:59pm


you should make it longer.......but atleast it ryhmes


purplified
Community Member





Tue Oct 16, 2007 @ 02:18pm


I would say its more a quote than a poem. still very good =]


Adian_Love14
Community Member





Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 08:47am


we may not no each other but, i like it! it's very...how should i say this...true. hmm i dont no if that is the right word but it's all i can come up with for right now. lol


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