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This Empty Place
I'm standing here sitting here laying here.

In this empty place I use to call a room.

But now its nothing. Nothing more then a memory.

I'm happy here angry here sad here.

In this empty place I use to call a home.

There's only questions no answers here.

In this empty place I use to call a world.

Everything I use to call my own is a lie.

Nothing more nothing less just pain and sadness.

In this empty place I use to call a life.






User Comments: [3]
Purplfied
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Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 05:47pm


Aww thats so sad but so well written but I think you left a word out

In this empty place I use to a world.

Should it be call a world?

sorry just noticed that lol but great poem as per usual my friend!


Immy the Strange
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 05:28am


It's sad but very well written. And if I annoy you with my comments just tell me...


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Doll Duchess
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Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 10:22am


I love how you write poetry! Its so meanginful!


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