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This is my little place to write and chat. Comment if you want. I useally talk about whats on my mind, rate something or just talk about a topic thats been going on today
Holy..he's at the story again, a new character emerges Part3
As Kariu stands wondering where he had heared that word before, the girl smirks, sliding a sword out from its sheath. "Die!" She screams swing the sword at Kairu's head. Kairu, before even he can think to do it, his three fingered left hand shoots up and catches the blade. Kairu, figuring out what is going on, hits her lightly, sending her reeling back, her sword still in his hand.
As she tries to catch her breath. Kairu looks at the weapon. It was a blade like in his arm, but so much thinner. Kairu, like a curius child, tries to bend it. It bends a little, making the girl cring.
"P-Please stop, don't hurt it.." small tears begin to form in her eyes.
"huh?..it can be hurt?" Kariu asks.
"huh?, no of coruse not, just don't break it." The girl slowly gets back to her feet, he two tails hanging limply at her sides.
Kairu didn't understand."but its a thing, it's not alive," Kairu looks closely at the blade.
The girl grits her teeth."Stop it! just give it back" She growls.
"Ok" Kariu walks over, startiling the girl, and hands thw blade over. The girls looks oddly at Kariu, then the sword, then back at Kariu."Why..why did you?..."
"Because you asked for it," Kariu smiles. While with Cub, he had learned if gave an animal what they wanted, they would useally be nicer. The girl looks silently at Kariu.
"Your not an angel, are you?" She looks hard over Kariu for signs of wings.
"Angels?" Kariu tilted his head slightly,"Is that what I am?"
The girl smiles and giggles a little,"Your a funny creature"
Kairu smiles, he like tha sound the girl made."What are you?"
The girl starts,"What?, I'm a demon, can't you tell?"
"De..mon.." This sounds familar to Kariu as well, why did so many things sound like he knew them at one time,"I'm Kariu..."
"Kariu?" The girls smiled, he tails perking up a so they now swished about," I'm Kitana..."

((So for such a long delay crying I'll do it more often from now on. Or as long as HW doens't get in the way sweatdrop ))






User Comments: [3]
Xx Mrs_L_Lawliet xX
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Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 12:30am


Your story is really good so far - I do hope you continue it


Warrior_Sky
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Mon Nov 26, 2007 @ 02:18pm


*sits at edge of seat waiting for the next part*


Norivia
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Fri Nov 30, 2007 @ 04:44am


Wow, Kairu. Didn't know you dabbled so much in online fiction. Interesting story... but it seems as if you're moving at an almost rushed pace. Detail can be tricky... But one thing that confuses me is the constant change in attitude Kitana seems to have when Kariu has the blade. Well, that's my two cents. Later!


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