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The Phases of my Life
This is a place I'm going to be putting up most of my poems, no one has to read them but if you do I would really like to know what you think of them. If you could please leave a comment or message me about it I would be thankful.
Who cares (poem)
this is a poem for my friend jinjin112

everyday,
everyday people struggle.
we struggle.
the struggle gets worse.
yet no one does anything about it.
but who cares?
not us.
we learn from our mistackes.
we grow, from what we learn.
we learn from each other.
in doing so,
we each evolve.
and maybe its not for the better.
it could be for the worse.
but who can tell?
not us.
no one knows whats right or wrong.
each of us make our own misstactes
we grow, we learn, we evolve.
that is life for us.
we change, thats the best part.
we change how we act,
we can change the world if we tried.
but do we?
no.
not us.
in the end, we might not last.
but who can be sure?
no one.
does it look like they care?
nope,
not us.
things can get better,
and people hope they do.
but it would be better.
if we tried a little harder.
but do we?
nope.
not us.






User Comments: [1]
jinjin112
Community Member





Sun Dec 09, 2007 @ 07:24am


YAY WHOOO AWESOME POEM
uh i mean.... solid... we all... stuggle... *shakes maraca* ... yea
lol mrgreen


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