Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

Report This Entry Subscribe to this Journal
Xcianna's Books WIP though
here are all my books that im writing no they're not finished but im working on that. Pay no heed to the errors I'm working on them as well.

The Mirror Realm


There once was a little cottage placed within a valley of wild flowers. Surrounding the valley was snowcapped mountains. Within the valley was a stream of the purest and freshest spring water from the mountains. Living in the cottage was a mother and a little girl. The girl's name was Aryll. She was only eight years old. Her hair was a dark brown, but turned dark red when it was hit directly by the sun. Her eyes were brown and shined beautifully. She was as delicate as a flower, but still seemed to get into trouble one way or another. One day Aryll went outside in a beautiful new dress her mother gave her. "Make sure not to get this dress wet." her mother told her. "I will I promise." Aryll replied. She went outside and played in the valley of flowers. While running around she tripped on a rock and fell into the stream. The stream was different that day. It was as deep as the ocean. Aryll couldn't hold her breath any longer and started to sink to bottom from lack of air. Then deep within the shadows of the ocean-like stream a boy was swimming after her. He grabbed her hand and took her to the surface. It was different though. The surface she was on now was dead. There was no life in it. As she lay down unconscious in the new world the boy tried to figure out who she was. He thought, 'A human from the other realm! This is the first one I've ever been this close to. If I don't do something my master will surely kill her.'
He took off his necklace. "I wish we could meet again." he said as he put a necklace around her. She faded away and ended up in her own world drenched from the stream. Her mother ran up to her. "Aryll! You fell into the water didn't you? Aryll! Aryll!" she yelled.

Seven years later her land was turning into the desolate area that she once visited but didn't know of. The flowers were dying and bringing up weeds and ferns. The mountains were no longer snowcapped and the stream was gone. There were only puddles left. Aryll was fifteen now and she was with her best friend Sarah. Sarah ran up to a puddle. "Hey Aryll! I just remembered about this book I read. It said that there were puddles everywhere and if you make a wish then throw your most prized possession into the puddles your wish will come true."
"What book did you get that from?" Aryll asked her.
"I think it was a legend book. So you want to try it?" Sarah said.
"Alright I mean I have nothing better to do." she replied.
Sarah was so excited that she went first. She took off a bracelet that was given to her by her great grandmother. "I wish I could have a pet dragon named Frugglenugget." she said then threw her bracelet into the water. The bracelet sank and disappeared. They both looked in. "Whoa!" they both said as they looked at each other." Ok Aryll you're next." Sarah said. Aryll nodded then took off the necklace. "I wish I could meet a guy who will like me for who I am. A guy that will never forget me. A guy who will take me to other worlds. A guy that is out of this world. A guy that will sweep me off my feet. A guy...”
“Come on this isn't going to turn out like a book is it?" Sarah interrupted. "I thought you didn't believe in the legends of the "other" worlds."
"Well it's a wish that could mean anything." Aryll said to her then threw the necklace into the puddle.

~~~


A little boy was playing in the puddle and saw the necklace rise up with the bracelet. "Wow! I need to show these to Master Malcolm" he said. He ran up to a man in a brown wizard’s coat. "Master, Look at what came out of the puddle from another realm." he said. "Hm. What do we have this time?" Malcolm said as he looked at the jewelry. He saw the necklace that he gave to the one girl seven years ago. "Oh no she took it off!" he said. He took the necklace and looked at the boy. "Which puddle did you find this necklace from?" he asked. The boy ran around for a while and couldn't remember. Malcolm went onto his knees. "I just hope she doesn't go near any water." he said. A little girl walked up to the little boy. "What's wrong with the master?" she asked. "I think he is heartbroken because he got a necklace returned to him from another realm." the boy replied. "Whoa, that's what you get for have a lover in another world." she said.

Both Aryll and Sarah had returned home after making their wishes. Aryll set up the bathtub and was going to feel if it was warm enough, but when she was about to touch the water she saw a guy in the water. "What the...?" she said.

Malcolm heard the girl and looked down to see her. He was surprised that she could see him. Only people from his realm could see through. Aryll put her hand into the water. Malcolm followed her moves and put his hand into the water as well. They grabbed each other’s hand. Aryll was scared so she let go and ran away. Malcolm’s apprentices walked up to him and asked," How did that girl see us?"
"She isn't an ordinary girl. That's for sure" Malcolm replied.

Aryll went into her room. She ran to her bed and held her pillow close to her. "Who was that? Who were they? I'm losing my mind. Yea that's it." she said. She put her pillow back when she calmed down and lay on her bed. "Maybe that was my wish. Maybe he was the guy that I wished for. Or it's my stupid imagination going crazy." she said. She took a deep breath in and went to sleep.

"Where am I?" she said as she looked around the field. It resembled her home but everything was full of life. There were flowers everywhere. "Why does this place seem familiar?" she thought as she looked once again. She saw a puddle nearby and looked in. She saw the same guy she saw in the bathtub. The guy in the puddle outstretched his hand toward her. She screamed and ran away. Words repeated in her head. "I wish I could meet a guy who will like me for who I am. A guy that will never forget me. A guy that will take me to other worlds. A guy that is out of this world. A guy that will sweep me off my feet." she heard then stopped. As she slowly turned around the guy that was in the puddle had came out, and his hand was outstretched in her direction as if he was asking her to come with him. She wondered if this was the guy that she was looking for so she decided to trust him and took his hand. He returned by smiling at her. He jumped with her in his hand and dived into the puddle. "Ahh!" she screamed then closed her eyes. Once she went into the puddle she opened her eyes and remembered when she was little and how she fell in. Aryll started sinking like she was drowning again. "Help." she said but started losing her breath. She was reaching her hand toward him, and he was trying to come back after her, but she blacked out then woke up.

Aryll went to her bathtub and looked in. Nothing. "I was just losing my mind a few minutes ago." she said as she looked at her watch. "More like a few hours ago." she said. Later Aryll went outside and looked for the exact puddle in her dreams. When she found it she jumped on it. Her feet got soaken wet. "What the heck? This was the exact puddle." she said. "How did I get into it when I was little?"
She started thinking about her past when she first fell in. "Wait a minute! I tripped and fell in head first." She said. Then she remembered that in her dream he dived in. Then she jumped into the air and dove head first into the puddle. Amazingly she made it through to the ocean like area she had visited before. She opened her eyes and was underwater. "Oh no! I forgot that I never made it through to the other side." she thought. She was swimming around the ocean-like puddle searching for the way out, but while she was swimming she couldn't hold her breath any longer. A cape appeared around her like magic, but because of that Aryll started sinking from lack of oxygen and from the weight of the robe. Two small hands reached out to her and she grabs them. They were pulling her up to land. Once Aryll was brought to land she gasped for air and had her head down covering her face. "What the heck do you think you were doing inside the parted seas? Only Master Malcolm can do such a difficult task. Uh oh here he comes." the kids told her. Malcolm walked up to her. "What do you have to say?" he asked her.
She looked up at him still breathing hard. She remembered him. "It...*pants* It was you." she whispered. "Come again?" he asked her. She got up and got in his face. "What the heck were you doing in my bathtub? I need answers and I want them Now!!" she said but was soon shut up when he put his hand over her mouth. "Listen to me now. Don’t talk about the other realm in these parts." he whispered into her ear. A cloud had covered the sun. "Kids to the cottage." he said. They all ran to the cottage and locked the doors and windows behind them. Malcolm had let Aryll go and signaled to stay where they were. Aryll had no clue about what was going on and got nervous from that. Everyone was silent and they didn't move at all. It's as if they turned into statues. Malcolm was right next to the door looking through a crack. A shadow figure passed the door and went away. Malcolm gave a sign that it was clear, and everyone started moving again. "What the heck was that?" Aryll asked really scared.
"That was the Master's seekers. They are wizard's like Malcolm but they have transformed into monstrous beings that look like shadow figures with yellow eyes. What they are told to do is to kill all people from other realms and turn wizards into seekers like them. The Master is the ruler of this land. We are in hiding from him for now. Only because Malcolm is trying to teach us how to travel through the worlds so that we can escape. A mere touch from the seekers can be it for us. So we need to train as fast as we can" said the boy. "Malcolm has been touched by them before and he is having a hard time trying to resist. If he does transform we have to do the best we can to survive by ourselves."
Aryll looked at Malcolm and he looked away as he leaned against a wall. She didn't know what to say to him. Malcolm started walking away. "Master where are you going?" the little girl asked. "I'm going to my room. I need to rest." he said.

Later Aryll and the two apprentices were sitting down on a couch in the living room. "So can you tell us how you got here?" the girl asked.
"Well when I jumped in I remembered when I was a little girl that I had been there before." she told them.
"You mean you visited the parted seas when you were our age. You must be really powerful just like Malcolm. You can help us get to the other side if Malcolm transforms.” they said getting excited.
“Actually I'm not powerful. I can't do the stuff you guys can do. I can only travel through to my world and back. I don't know if I can do anything else."
"Ok, but if he does transform at least take us to your world." they begged.
"Alright." she said.
"Can you do me something as well?" the little girl asked.
"What is it?"
"Could you tell us how you came here when you were our age?"
"Oh ok."
"Yea!" they both said with joy.
"When I was little about your age I was playing with this brand new dress my mother gave me. She told me not to get the dress wet, and I promised that I wouldn't. While I was playing in the flowers I tripped on a rock and fell head first into the stream. You see, my world was beautiful and it had a stream running right through it. Much like what this place is now." she told them. Malcolm overheard her and started listening in.
"Wow! So if it was dead here it would be beautiful there?"
"Right."
"Continue the story."
"Ok, well after I fell in I wasn't in a normal stream. It was like a huge ocean. I tried to swim back to the top, but something was pulling me down."
"It might have been The Master."
"Maybe."
"What happened next?"
"Well after that I blacked out, and when I woke up I was in my room. I had this beautiful necklace around me. I had no clue how I got it. Or where it came from."
"Wow. What happened to the necklace? You aren't wearing it now."
"Well yesterday I was playing with my friend Sarah and she told me about a legend that if you throw your most prized possession in a puddle your wish that you make will come true. So I threw the necklace into the puddle and it sank with Sarah's bracelet." she finished.
"I found a necklace and a bracelet come out of one of the puddles outside, but Malcolm has them right now. He said something about giving a necklace to a pretty girl he met in the parted seas. Maybe that was you, and maybe the necklace that you had was the one he gave you." they boy told her.
"It's possible, but I think that my mom could have given me the necklace as a good luck charm. She is very superstitious."
"Oh. Well that was good to know. Who knew a girl from the other realm could travel through time? Oh I'm sorry we don't have a room for you." they told her
"It's ok I'll sleep on the couch."Aryll replied
"Ok, Goodnight." they said as they went to their rooms.
Aryll set up the couch and went to bed.
Malcolm tried to get some rest when he heard a voice in his head. Stop resisting Malcolm. Kill that girl and turn your apprentices into my seekers as well.
"I won't. I won't do it. You can't make me." he said while using all his power to resist. Aryll heard him and woke up. She walked up to his room. "Malcolm? Are you alright?" she asked. She walked in and the door shut on its own. "Malcolm? This isn't funny please open the door." she said starting to get scared. She walked a little further and saw him. He was turning into a monstrous being. But you could tell he was resisting. He had one hand on his head trying to keep him from turning faster. His hand was reaching out for her, but his hand had transformed already and looked as if it was crawling ever so slowly up his wrist and his arm. "Malcolm I... I can't if I do me...I" she looked at him again. His eyes were so sad though. Aryll knew he was begging for help. She couldn't take anymore of his suffering and grabbed his hand with both of hers. When she touched him she saw what happened while she drowned. He saw her falling down and went after her. As he was pulling her up she was being pulled down a little, but he was a strong enough swimmer to save her. After he brought her to his land he put a necklace around her so that the next time she went head first into water she wouldn't go into the seas like last time. When the necklace was put around her she was automatically transported to her own land. "It was you?" she said. "You saved me. Thank you so much." She then smiled at him and he returned the smile. She then kissed Malcolm on the cheek. He touched his cheek with a surprised look on his face and stopped turning into a monstrous being. He put his hand against her cheek. "Thank... you!" the words struggled out of him in a whisper like form."No, thank you. If you hadn't saved me when I was little. I would have never been here." she said to him and had her hand on his. He smiled at her then let go and fell asleep. She got up and went back to the couch.

The next day she woke up to the smell of bacon and eggs in the air. "Mmm that smells good." she murmured half asleep. "Wakey wakey, it's time for breakfast." the girl said. "I don't think she's gonna wake. What is her name anyways?" the boy said. The girl pointed her finger towards Aryll and started levitating her, "Hey! Ok I'm up put me down!" Aryll yelled. "Not until you tell us your name." the girl told her. "Ok, can I at least get your names to? Besides Malcolm though." she replied.
"Alright, I'm Ellina and that is Ryoke (re-oak). Ok I put up my part of the bargain now what is your name?" Ellina asked. ". My name is Aryll." she said. "Please put me down now." she asked nicely. "Nah I don't feel like it." Ellina said. "Ellina!" she yelled then pointed her finger at her and it started glowing green. "Let me go!" she told her and started falling. "Ahh!" she screamed then fell on the ground. Ryoke ran up to Ellina "Why did you just drop her like that?" he yelled at her. "I didn't do anything. My powers were just cancelled. She did something. Didn't you see her finger glow?" Ellina said as she pointed towards Aryll. Ryoke turned away from her and ran up to Aryll. "Aryll, are you ok?" he asked. "Yea I guess." she replied. Malcolm walked out. "What was that huge thump?" he asked. He saw Aryll and his eyes gotten wider. He remembered last night when she kissed him. "Uh...” he stuttered then saw the bacon starting to burn.”I'll get the bacon." he said as he grabbed the pan and put the bacon the plate. "Ellina levitated Aryll then dropped her." Ryoke said. "So that's your name." Malcolm said towards Aryll. "As for you Ellina you have to clean up the dishes without your magic."
"It's not fair. I didn't do anything. She has the magic that cancelled mine punish her." Ellina yelled. "Aryll, did you really cancel her magic?" he asked as he walked up to her. "I don't know I just pointed my finger like this." she said then started pointing her finger towards him. Her finger started glowing green like it was going to shoot something at him. He pushed her hand to the side and the glow shot off her fingers like a gun, went into the fireplace, and exploded. "Never point your fingers at anyone anymore, Aryll." He said in a very serious voice. Aryll turned around and walked to the door. "Aryll, where are you going?" Ryoke asked her. She turned her head and said, "I'm going back." she then opened the door and stepped out into a dark realm. It had a few asteroids here and there but there were dark purple clouds surrounding the place. She then froze in her place. Malcolm walked out. "What did you do? Aryll? Hello? What are you looking at?" he said to her. He looked ahead and saw a seeker not far away. "Aryll, run back to the house." he said then turned around and the house was gone. Ryoke and Ellina had closed the door and left them in the other realm. "M...Mal... Malcolm where are we?" Aryll asked him still frozen. "We are in his chambers. This is the Master's realm. How did you open it?" he asked her. But froze like her when the seeker looked in their direction. "Stay very still and the seeker won't see you." he whispered in her ear. A drop of sweat fell off her cheek and splashed on the ground. The seeker heard it and went after her. "Wait!" a voice came out of nowhere. "It is you! I thought Malcolm killed you. It seems you can't make the creator of the seekers to do a simple job that I could have done a long time ago. Malcolm why did you refuse to do it? You could have done it in a flash but instead you choose to stay in your pathetic human form." Aryll looked at him. "You were ordered to kill me? You’re the creator of these monsters? How could you?" Aryll said then ran away. "Aryll wait!" Malcolm yelled. "That's right, be afraid of him. He is destined to kill you anyways." the master yelled. "Aren't you Melchior?"
Malcolm felt a pain in his chest. "What the heck did you do?" he struggled to say. "Oh I just said your real name. That will definitely wake your true nature right, Melchior?" the master replied. Malcolm felt another pain in his chest. It was like every time the master said that he was being stabbed with a dagger right in his heart. Malcolm was on his knees now. "Now Melchior, Show your true form and kill that wretched girl." the master said in an evil yet happy voice. Malcolm turned into a true seeker. He couldn't control his body or his thoughts. He gave out a yell that was louder than anything in the world to show that Melchior has returned.

~~~


Aryll ran as far as she could. She stopped to gasp for air. Malcolm screamed like Bloody Murder and Aryll turned around. "Malcolm!" she screamed. "No, I can't I'll be killed. Because that's what I'm destined to be. That's my fate." she looked down and put her head in her hands and cried."Aw poor Aryll. Or should I say, Arella." a voice said. Aryll was shocked. "It's all coming back to me. I remember now. You, the so called master of the realms you’re my... my ... my brother." she said. "I was never from the other realm. I was from here, and you were trying to kill me because if I did ever fall in love and get married I would be the new Master. Also, the reason you couldn't come to the other realms to kill me is because you didn't have that power. Mom did. As did the people from her realm. That's why I was in the other realm. Mom probably took me there, and she didn't want me to go back. That's why mom told me not to get the dress wet, and that was the day Malcolm saved me. Wait if he saved me then that means Malcolm...”
"You mean Melchior. The demon kid that was born in your mother's destroyed realm. He was banished because his father was the Head of the seekers. When his father died that power would be passed on to him." The master interrupted. "Now he is the horrible abomination that his father once was. No one will ever love him, and from that he will never be human again. Oh speak of the devil here he comes." He said. Aryll looked over and saw a shadow like figure that stood probably 10 feet high. His eyes are a bloody red. Arella stood there looking at him. "No, Malcolm why? Why couldn't you resist?" she started cry as she looked at him. "His name is Melchior. Oh and by the way. Kill her." the master yelled. Melchior came after her. "Melchior please stop, or you'll force me to do something I never wanted to do." she yelled at him then pointed her finger towards his direction. He didn't bother to even slow down. "Gomen Melchior." she said as she started to build up power to shoot at him, but something grabbed her from behind and pulled her away from him. It was Ellina and Ryoke. They pulled her into the house and shut the door. "That was close." Ryoke said. Aryll ran to the door "No, Malcolm!" she yelled then opened the door, but she wasn't in the other realm anymore. She was at the field where she first arrived here. "Why do you want to go back Aryll? He was going to kill you." Ellina said. Aryll looked down. "Your right. I'll be over there if you ever need me." she said then started walking to Malcolm’s room. "Aryll, why are you going in Malcolm’s room?" Ellina asked. "I left something in here." she said quietly then closed the door. She looked and looked then found what she was looking for. She found the necklace Malcolm gave her when she was little, and put it around her neck. She layed down on his bed, and never stopped thinking about him.
~~~

Right when Aryll was dragged in and the door shut Malcolm turned back into his normal self. "What... What happened?" he asked himself. "Oh here, let me refresh your memory." The master said then put what just happened into his mind. "No... No! Why? Why do I have to do this? Why do I have to kill her?" he yelled at him.
"Now Melchior, you aren't actually showing that you have fallen in love with my sister have you? Because if you were then that is a great way to say why we have to kill her. Besides it's a one-sided love. Why would anyone love a cursed demon boy like you? Even if you are the best guy a girl could meet, could they handle the other side of you? We now know that dear Arella is afraid of you and there is no possible way now that she could love you since she is in fear of you." he said. Malcolm was on the ground he couldn't help but cry out. "It's not true. You’re lying. I know and I'll prove you wrong one day. You'll see." he yelled.
~~~

Aryll put the necklace on her. "Malcolm I don't know why, but whenever I say your name I get this weird feeling inside of me. When you were your other form I admit I was scared, but I never wanted to leave you. When I was dragged back into the house by Ellina and Ryoke I yelled out your name, and no matter how hard I try I can't stop thinking about you" she thought.
~~~

Malcolm was on lying down on the ground, his eyes were spaced out and he couldn't get the picture of Aryll out of his head. "Aryll, I know that you were afraid of me back there, but I couldn't control my body. You have to understand that when I am in that form. No matter how hard I try I can't stop killing. It's like something very deep inside of me is trying to take control over me permanently, but I won't let It." he thought then closed his eyes. "Mom, I'm sorry that I never listened to you, and I hope that you will forgive me for what I've done. I'm sorry." he said. A voice came out, “I overheard you so I might as well ask. What did you do to your mother?" the master asked. "Well I'll tell since I have nothing better to do. When I was a little boy, about 9 to be exact. I put a curse on my mother. The curse was that when she died her spirit would wander in the spirit realm searching to find eternal happiness, but everyone knows the spirit realm is in between the lands of happiness and suffering. And if she went through the gates out of the spirit realm, thinking it is the gates to happiness her spirit would vanish." he said. "But it was an accident when I did it. So I hope she does find eternal happiness."
"A bit harsh on her don't you think?" the master replied.
"HEY! I told you it was an accident alright. I couldn't control myself. Sometimes I just wish I wasn't born, but I found a reason for me to be here. Aryll. I can remember when I first met her. I may be absolute evil because of my father, but there is still good in me. And whether half good or half evil I bet she still loves me. "
"Now don't go talking nonsense about her loving you again. Because I won't believe it."
"Fine, but you don't know what true love is and I bet you never will." he said then fell asleep.
~~~

Aryll woke up from the intense glowing of the necklace she is wearing. "Hello? Please answer me." it yelled.
"Who are you?" Aryll asked.
“The better question is who are you and why are you wearing my son's necklace?" the voice said back to her. "Wait, could you be his true love? Well, it’s about time. Gosh do you know how many times he has tried to get a girl and failed. It's no wonder he went to the dark side. So what's your name sweetie? Oh how rude of me though I should be introducing myself first. My name is Marabell. I am Melchior's mother but this is actually the first time I was able to get through. Only true love can do that I guess. Anyways what's your name?"
"Well first off it's nice to meet you Marabell, well hear you actually. And secondly, my name is Arella, but i prefer to be called Aryll."
"Arella, where have I heard that before. Wait your the princess that escaped from your brother and father. Gosh, you and Melchior are so much alike... "
"Actually he prefers Malcolm."
"Well at least he's taken some consideration of changing his name. He was such a good boy until he got his powers. Then he told about this beautiful girl that came from another realm. Oh, the story goes on and on, but I’m so happy that he found you. You can help him if he ever gets into his true form."
"Too late."
"Oh geese. Well I'm glad I got in contact with you now more than ever. Listen you have to face him, but you must wear this necklace. You see before I died my magic was forcibly put into this necklace, and if he wears it his powers are under his control. But, if he gives it to you, well let's say that you are protected from his curses and powers. You might want to help him now before my magic isn't enough to hold him back."
"Alright I will."
"Good luck and remember I'm only a thought away.” she said. When she finished the necklace stopped glowing.
"I'm going to help him. No matter what." Aryll said then headed for the door while Ellena and Ryoke were asleep. "Just a little more." she said. "Freeze!" said Ellina and Ryoke. Aryll gave a look that a caught burglar would use. "We knew you were trying to sneak out. Now stay in here or else." they said. "Are you quite finished?" she asked then used her magic to wrap them up in there blankets so that they couldn't escape. "No fair. You’re using your powers that you learned in less than a day to stop us, and you’re stronger than us! How is that possible?" they yelled. "Yea, well I'm leaving to save Malcolm so Chou." she replied then opened the portal to the other realm. When she fully walked in the portal to the house vanished. “Malcolm!" she cried out.
~~~

Malcolm looked around when he heard a voice. "Aryll?" he thought. "I bet the master is just playing tricks on me just to make me angry. Well if he keeps it up it'll work." he said. "Oh, so you think that I can mimic my sister's voice? For shame Melchior. Even I can't do that." the master said. Malcolm's face lit up when he heard her yell again. He ran toward the sound of her voice, but froze for a second when the master said," You know Malcolm, the minute she sees your face you will transform into your other side, and you know what that means, right? She will probably run screaming." Malcolm stood there trying to see if he could argue with what the master had said, but couldn't think of anything at all.
~~~

Aryll ran everywhere searching for Malcolm, but when she finally found him he turned around and started walking away. "Malcolm wait!" she yelled. When she finally caught up with him she tried to talk to him, but he never turned around to look at her. "Malcolm!" she yelled hoping he would turn around. "Malcolm what's wrong?" she asked. "I can't look at you." he said. "Or else."
"What? Why?"
"I can't tell."
"Malcolm I.. I.. I really kinda sorta l.. l..li" she struggled.
Malcolm's eyes widened then tears streamed down his face. He then turned around and looked at Aryll. She was looking down while trying to say what she was saying. Malcolm put his hand on her chin and slowly lifted her head up to look at him. She saw his face with the tears and a smile that trembled. His eyes were so sad. At that moment she knew what was going to happen to him. He hugged her and whispered in her ear, "Gomenasai." Arylls eyes widened and she burst into tears in his arms. While in the middle of her crying Malcolm started to transform. "No Malcolm! Please fight it! I know you can." she cried out. "Please.. run." he said then pushed her away from him. Aryll fell to the ground and watched him transform into a horrible beast. She wiped the tears from her face and stood up. "What are you doing my sister? He has transformed to his true self and you still don't run like he has requested. Are you paralyzed with fear or are you just being stupid like you usually are." the master said. "NO! I've had enough with running away! I'm going to do something i should have done a long time ago." Aryll said then looked over to the transformed Malcolm. "You want me. Well come and get me." Melchior looked at her and gave her an evil smile. He charged after her with his hands extended out to grab her.




xcianna
Community Member
  • [10/30/08 06:31am]
  • [12/23/07 06:42am]
  • [12/23/07 05:25am]
  • [12/16/07 06:34am]
  • [11/28/07 02:52am]
  • [06/14/07 03:27am]
  • [05/05/07 05:26am]




  • User Comments: [2]
    d a r k-n e k o-g u r ll
    Community Member





    Sat Apr 12, 2008 @ 05:47am


    its really good, the improvements are nice and i love what you added 10/10 lol anyway its really good so far can't wait to see what happens next.


    User Image
    xcianna
    Community Member





    Sat Apr 12, 2008 @ 09:10pm


    thanks it may take a while before the rest of it in my head makes enough sense to start writing again


    User Comments: [2]
     
     
    Manage Your Items
    Other Stuff
    Get GCash
    Offers
    Get Items
    More Items
    Where Everyone Hangs Out
    Other Community Areas
    Virtual Spaces
    Fun Stuff
    Gaia's Games
    Mini-Games
    Play with GCash
    Play with Platinum