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Secret of the Land of the Whirlpool (Chapter 6)
Oh boy. Another chapter. There'll be plenty after this, I assure you. I haven't even planned on how many chapters there are going to be, so bear with me on this unplanned fan fiction. Oh, I also want to show you guys this because I'm kinda struggling with a girl right now. And no, she's not my girlfriend. I just feel this way about what we're both going through right now.

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Fenix and Toukun flew to the ground and hit with a giant THUMP! Fenix was the first to stand up and say, "I can't believe you would kill the only person who loved you. What did you turn into, Toukun? You're body is only a vision of what it used to be in the past."

Toukun staggered while getting up. These words angered him, yet they barely changed how he felt. "Just shut up, Fenix! I don't need your stupid opinion!" He performed some hand signs and a sand wave started at Fenix.

Fenix ran forward to shoulder bash through the wave. "What's wrong with your sand jutsu, Toukun? It seems you've gone rusty on them. I'm pretty sure Rin or Asuka could've busted through that one," he taunted, still running at Toukun. He then flipped forward and came down with a punch on top of the sand ninja's head. This made him take a face plant while the leaf ninja was stand above him, towering in victory over him.

"You make me sick, Toukun. I thought your dream was to gain power so that you can defeat me. It seems that you've gotten weaker since last I saw you," Fenix said, crouching to the sand ninja's level but not totally.

Toukun's anger came out. He grabbed his sword and swung at Fenix's feet, but the attempt was futile as he jumped over it and backwards. "I'll show you how strong I've gotten Fenix! I'll show you!" he yelled out. He hopped to his feet and focused his chakra. First, he ripped off his mask to show his mouth. Second, Toukun focused his chakra and it began to gain color as the chakra around him turned a green color.

"What is this chakra? First it was Sindri, now it's Toukun. What are they that gives them this colored chakra?" Fenix thought. He then shouted out, "Hey! What type of chakra is that? You and Sindri seem to share the same type of chakra."

Toukun smirked evilly. He said, "Good obversation. This chakra you see before you is actually chakra coming from one of the nine tailed beasts. Mine is the three-tailed beast. It has the shape of a turtle. Sindri's is the seven-tailed beast. That one takes the shape of a badger. You might not live to see it's chakra take shape, though." He disappeared with an evil laugh lingering in the air and smoke left in Toukun's place.

Suddenly, a punch hit Fenix in the face then another then another. He was being given an merciless beating. He was hit in the gut, tripped in the front, and then hit back onto his feet. Only flashes of Toukun could be seen. When Fenix released two of the gates, he blocked a punch then got hit with the other. After releasing two more gates he started to block all of the punches and keep up with Toukun. Fenix finally landed a hit onto Toukun's face and started to wail on him back. Finally, Fenix sweeped Toukun, placing him on his back.

Fenix fell to his knees. Toukun obviously liked to play around before getting to the real business when he seemed incredibly stronger. Fenix coughed and then spat out some blood that lingered around in his mouth. "You're... powerful. I can... say that at the least." He fell to his knees and breathed deep as he regained his breath. Then he brought out his dagger knuckles. He applied spikes to his knuckles so that he could do more damage.

The taijutsu specialist Fenix looked at Asuka. He felt sorry that he had to do this to Toukun. But who would if not him? She certainly wouldn't. He got all eight spikes applied and walked over to Toukun, who's chakra now resembled the shape of a turtle's. One small stub of a tail was sticking out of Toukun's tailbone as he got up. The whirling and flow of chakra could be heard in Fenix's ears.


The leaf ninja muttered, "Aw, crap." At that moment, Toukun punched out chakra and it sent Fenix flying, skipping on the top of the lake until Fenix got a log from a scroll in his tool bag.

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I don't know if the log thing is right. The log thing could just be a jutsu. But while watching Naruto today, I saw some scrolls pop out of Naruto's tool bag as he fell. Some smoke pellets also fell out, but as Sasuke and Naruto hit the water, two logs were there for them to stand on. Alex, if you're reading this, please inform me if it's scrolls or some type of summoning jutsu that even a low rank ninja can do. I think it's scrolls. Now back to your non-paid fan fiction.

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Fenix stood on top of the log, staring at Toukun from afar. His glare showed intense focus and a ready-to-kill look. As Toukun came at him, Fenix stepped on the middle of the log to make it split into about six equal pieces, and then took a piece to throw at Toukun. He did so, but the log burst into green flames. With the sixth gate unlocked, Fenix could see at least some of Toukun's movements.

Toukun shot out a chakra to try and grab Fenix, but he flipped up and dodged another grab, dodged a kick, and dodge the last kick. He landed to look at Toukun who was on all fours at this moment.

"You monster. I can't believe you would resort to trapping tailed beasts within yourselves to gain power," Fenix said with his head tilted to the right just a slight. He burst forward with a dash that sent water splashing out to the sides. Toukun had a shell on his back from the chakra. That couldn't be the best place to strike. Toukun performed some hand signs that made a water spiral go at Fenix. He blocked and then Toukun stomped on him with a hand. With more hand signs, five water sharks formed in the water and started to go after Fenix.

"You'll now see the power of Five Shark Meal!" Toukun yelled with a demonic raspy voice. The sharks were Great White Sharks that were tougher than a normal one. But Fenix cut through them with his chakra focused on his dagger knuckles. Pieces of the sharks came off, but they healed with more water. When they came back once more, he punched each in the nose and swam forward to follow through and destroy each shark fully. Fenix swam to the surface and took his place on it like it was solid ground, but he was wetter than he ever could get. Plus, he had some scratches on his arms from passing by the teeth while punching the sharks.

Fenix's head hung low as he breathed hard. He put his hands behind his head so he could breath easier. "Okay. I'm getting sick of your sharks. I'm not going to be any meal for them," he said while staring at him.

Toukun focused his chakra into the Sawfish sword and threw it at Fenix before he had any chance to rest. A green chakra was emitting from it that extended its range. Fenix jumped up to barely graze it and it plunked into the water. The Sawfish seemed to swim back to Toukun as he controlled it. Without a word, he ran at Fenix at top speed and hit the top of his head with the flat part of the sword to plummet him into the water. Then Toukun dove in and swam with the Sawfish, cutting Fenix up badly.

Fenix shot his chakra one way to move him swiftly in able to dodge the sword. Then he punched Toukun in the face to give him a chance to swim to the surface. He did that while focusing chakra to his skin and heal him.

Once Fenix reached the surface, he saw Toukun coming fast with the Sawfish but he jumped back to dodge. Toukun flipped forward and tried to slice Fenix in half, but Fenix side-stepped the slash and stabbed Toukun in the side. With the dagger. Right after that, he applied claws to his knuckles and added cutting edges to his forearms. Lastly, he put dagger tips on the bottom of his shoes. Fenix looked like the most dangerous person ever with all the equipment.

He then kicked the deadly sand ninja up into the air then jumped up. He clawed him and used snow leopard strikes that just glanced off with the forearm and pinky knuckle. Fenix kicked Toukun to land and then grabbed ahold of the ninja. With arms and legs stuck into Toukun by sharp metal, Fenix brought Toukun to the floor with a neck shattering head slam. Unfortunately, Toukun kicked Fenix in the face, making him fly back.

At this moment, Sindri woke up, taking the needle out of his neck. A light brown chakra eminated from his body while he stood up. With an evil grin, Sindri looked at Toukun. He said, "I see you've taken a beating brother. You must be exhausted."

"Yes, I am. He's good. I can tell that he knows how to unlock the inner gates. I've made out at about six from his chakra release and speed," Toukun replied. The chakra that eminated from Toukun was brought down an notch after that hit. It seems like the tailed beasts don't have unlimited chakra.

Fenix got up from the hit, clutching his face, and looked at the two powerful mean. Now he had two to deal with. "Oh, please no. One was enough," he said. He took off all of his equipment and dropped it. The scrolls were used and he couldn't put them back in for the moment. It would just take a long time, and time was what he needed. He reached in his bag to take out two giant claws that weren't just leather and three-pronged metal on the end. These claws fit over the whole hand like a glove and the sharp fingers were tipped with poison. There were some extra features to these claws, too.

A rustling could be heard from afar from the forest. Fenix looked over to see Rin had disappeared from her spot and was no where to be seen. He hoped she hadn't run away, but he also hoped she had a plan ready.

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I hope that keeps you readers occupied for a while. If you're reading this, please comment so I can see my readers. All I know is that there is about twelve of you.






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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 21, 2008 @ 02:47pm
well you know that i read this lucky so ha
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