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Chapter 5:Aftermath
((Do not read this if you did not read chapter 1, 2,3 or 4..it will just spoil the fun for you...))


The mansion quickly spreaded on fire, from the wing that exploded it kept on moving threw the mansion. As the flames spread threw the house the more smoke that goes up to the sky, the already night sky turns much darker as the smoke clouds up. Then the sound of Sirens can be heard as a Fire Truck nears the mansion, the fire truck then hits the breaks as they see the gate closed and locked. A fireman gets off and trys pring it open but it does'nt budge, then the fire man gets back on the truck and it rams the gate open and drives up infront of the mansion. From there 8 firemen comes off the truck and 3 of them goes and gets the hose, one unraveling, one hooking it up to the fire hydrant and the third holding the fire hose. Then after 30 seconds a burst of water comes out the house hitting the flames causing steam now to fly up into the air. the firemen continue to hose down the Mansion till they hear a scream. Two brave firemen breaks down the door, both of them holding a hose and begins hosing down the flames as they make their way to a room. They kick the door open to see the room on fire completly but they hear coughing, so they fire more water at the flames and the flames in the room die down. The two fire men then sees a closed safe in the wall, it is a big looking safe looking more like a bank vault. After hacking away with thier axs, finnaly the vault opens and their are around 20 bags of benjimens, 10 sacks of Diamonds and their is a girl sitting in the middle of it, wearing a neckless with words encrusted in it saying"Daddys little angel."10 minutes later thier are 10 fire trucks outside, 4 ambulances and 8 police cars outside. The paramedics has the girl wrapped in a towel and she seemed unharmed. The paramedics pulls out 4 bodys that are wrapped in sheets, the police are investigating the scene putting out yellow tape and closing off the mansion till the FBI arrives.


((Finnally i took the time up to finish this, now time to close this chapter with the final chaper.))






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Chai High Tuba
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 12, 2005 @ 05:40pm
*Odd, big, toothy grin.* Yay, I wasn't completely obliterated!


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 12, 2005 @ 05:40pm
Yesh, i decided i wanted to make myself have a daughter.



Jinatious Sinji
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Chai High Tuba
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 12, 2005 @ 05:44pm
Hee hee, that's awesome. And the house changed into a mansion, if I'm correct.


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 12, 2005 @ 09:38pm
House? Mansion? It's all good. but the main thing is: Vash still lives!



Elliot Salem
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Jinatious Sinji
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 13, 2005 @ 04:16am
Not even in your life you can think of living after that..


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 13, 2005 @ 10:55pm
stare ...died on gaia and in a story... talk2hand



Giancarlo Vega
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Elliot Salem
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 14, 2005 @ 03:38pm
Don't feel bad Neef.


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 01, 2005 @ 10:43pm
Yeah neef, not my fault you died before i could finish my story..i know thats not helping.



Jinatious Sinji
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