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Chapter 4: The final battle part 2
((Do not read this if you did not read chapter 1, 2 or 3..it will just spoil the fun for you...))


Vash is behind the bed post, jin is taking cover behind a wall and neef is taking cover behind a dresser. Jin is loading his gun, wincing when he moves his shot arm. Vash is thinking of how he is gonna kill Jin and Neef and what he is going to do to the bodys"Will i put explosives in there mouths and watch them explode, or ill set this place on fire and let them cremated or.."Vash is saying to himself. Neef is searching himself for any more weapons and looking around his area to see how he can let Vash and Jin kill each other and him escape. Jin smirks, shouting out"Hey Vash and Neef, it was fun knowing you two espiecally that last hiest we did together."Neef nods smiling also"We was the best partners around."Vash does'nt show any sign of feelings"But it is a shame im going to have to kill you both and take all the money for myself."Vash shouted out. Jin sighs"Well you guys, i guess we should end it right now."Neef nods in agreement"Okay in three."Vash nods also"Three."Jin heart pounds"Two."All three of them says"One at the same time and comes out of hiding shooting at one another, buillets fly and one hits a lamp causing the room to darken completly. It is pitch black, but they continue shooting at each other causing light to shine trew the darkness from the guns. Then all that sounds at the end is clicks, then the sound of guns droping then foot steps. Vash breagthing is barly heard, and Jin has a great advantage over them both, one of his eyes can see in the dark but blind in light. Vash senses is very good though, he hears jin's foot steps and ducks under the slash that jin send from his claws and Vash unsheaths a combat knife and stabs Jin trew his rib cage causing jin to fall with a thump. Neef runs over to the thump and kicks Vash in the face causing Vash to slam into the floor, vash trows the blade and it stabs into neef's chest causing neef to fall down to the ground dead. Vash gets up looking at neef then at jin grinning, then he walks over and kicks jin in the head, but jin just smirks"You are about to die with us vash.."Vash just begins laughing, but then jin drops something on the ground. Vash digs into his back pocket and looks at whats on the ground which causes his eyes to widen"You Bitc..."A explosion happens, a big one causing the windows of the house to shatter and fire come out the window onto the lawn. The whole house seemed to have exploded, causing a dark cloud to go into the sky.

((Guys, dont think the action is done yet, i have about 2 more chapters im going to make.))
((If you read this, make a comment..))






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Jinatious Sinji
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 06:51pm
I am going to add 2 or maybe 3 if im not lazy.


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 09:17pm
Lol good, but i wanna know what happen to the money......XD. O and did u all die *Praysthat they are dead*



Ryuu Shinra
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Jinatious Sinji
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 09:45pm
The whole house exploded, neef and vash was about 2 yards away from the bomb...what do you think?


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 10:14pm
stare i died



Giancarlo Vega
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Elliot Salem
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 11:18pm
Jin you know nothing about me. I come prepared. By prepared I mean shotguns, knives, pistols, grenades etc.


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 15, 2005 @ 08:02pm
Its a story vash...i dont know you because you dont ever tell anyone...besides that..i wanted a dark scene where we fight close combat.



Jinatious Sinji
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Elliot Salem
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 16, 2005 @ 05:11pm
That's when I'd discard all other weapons, exepct a knife.


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 12, 2005 @ 09:19pm
Oh that's cool.... Oh.. And I reopend the EGPF...



king_of_the_wind
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Chai High Tuba
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 12, 2005 @ 04:35pm
*Watches.* This is interesting.


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