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N.O.R.
Chapter three
today is a day in my life that i never thought that i would never thought it would come. it was a misty day. rain had been coming and going all day and i was sitting in a tree watching the clouds until..... i was struck by lightning. while i was struck, my life had passed before my eyes. i had remebered the many enemy's i had over the years. i thought this could be it. even though it was my fifteenth year in this world, it didnt matter now. after i was struck i woke up. i was in a dark void of emptyness. their was no one, no where to go, just darkness everywhere. but then a figure came up to me. i said oh its u again, been a while since we seen each other. The figure said yes it has and we have unfinished business to settle. the figure came out of the shadows, it was ron. what i wondered how come he's here. but then i remebered he's my good side. so if i had died he would have to. so what now i said. he said there is only one thing we can do. fine then shall we begin. lets he said. we flew at each other. we started exchanging punches and kicks. we were evenly matched. this is like our last encounter is it not i said. he said yes it is but this time i have a few new moves. i said i also have a few tricks up my sleeve. we stoped fighting for the moment and landed to the ground. for the moment ron had started charging up his power and his body was glowing blue. for the last few seconds he said "final control" and then he vanashined for a few seconds and reappeared i thought that nothing had happened but i was wrong. a sudden pain had strucked my whole body at once and i fell to the ground on one knee. i was panting and i said what did u do? he said my move final control lets me slow down time for a moment of time. well this makes it more challenging i said. i thought man this is going to be a problem. but i had tougher battles than this. i charged at him and did a low kick at him. he jumped up in the air and shot a ki blast at me. i blocked it before it directly hit me. i teleported behind his back and grabbed his leg. i swung him a couple of times before i threw him into the ground. he quickly got up and punched my in the stomach. then he punched me in the chest. i flew back from the impact, but i quickly got up and charged at him. we started blocking and exchanging blows rapidly then we both did a hard punch at each other in the face. we both had each others fist in our jaws. then we flew up and continued to exchange blows. i said this is a good battle. yes it is he said, but. but what i said. he then said "final control". i tried to stop him, but it was to late. he did the same thing to me again. my body was in great pain. but i didnt quit. i decided it was time to use my newest move. i then charged my power as my body started to glow red. he was backing up a little. then i said "nova blast". then everything blew up like a atomic bomb. after everthing had cleared up i was barely standing, and so was he. we were both tired from our battle. he said this is not over. i said i know it just begun. To be continued






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tha main one
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 12:35am
once again i love it. as i read ur stroies picture are going in my head. ^^ yay tell me when u got the next 1. love ya bro bro


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 07:48am
kool stories



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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 10, 2008 @ 03:00pm
brava very good
grrrrrrrrr you better start working on chapter 4


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