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Okay, since my friend didn't like the other one, he told me to delete it. I won't delete it, instead here is the alternate. It will go accordingly to the first time except Asuka and Toukun are strongly dating now. They aren't married just yet. Also, another friend has suggested a Bleach style fan fiction. I don't know much about it, so if there's any good Bleach role plays, please let me know.

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Senshi gave a loud, morning caw in front of Toukun's face at the bedside. He gave some groans and finally got out of bed. The former ninja smelt the greatest smell in the world to him. Breakfast pancakes that his girlfriend cooks. He showered up and went down to the kitchen.

The sneaky boyfriend gave a sort of glomp onto Asuka, making her jump. He hugged her almost in a bear hug style. Toukun's kept some of his ninja skills at least.

"Happy Valentine's Day, Asuka!" Toukun exclaimed, leaning his head on his wife's shoulder, looking at the finished breakfast. The pancakes were in the shapes of hearts. "Aw, you're so nice. You didn't have to do this," he told her, giving her a soft kiss on the lips. He set up the table and plates. Three plates were actually needed. Two for Toukun and Asuka, and the third one was Senshi's.

At the table, Senshi was to the right of Toukun, and Asuka was to the left. They ate up their breakfast and got ready for work. They hugged and kissed each other goodbye. Asuka left in her shinobi clothes, and Toukun left in jean overalls.

Once Toukun arrived at work, though, he quickly changed into a dark suit with nothing but black. It cover his whole body except above his mouth. He stood upon the corner of a building in darkness. Then the dark raven Senshi flew to his master's shoulder, unseen by anyone. They seemed like one dark shadow, a statue.

Suddenly, an emergency bell rang loud as a store was being robbed. The thief ran through the streets clear as day. Senshi flew and knocked him in the head from behind; then Toukun came from the front to trip the thief. Before any other ninja could arrive, or anyone realized what happened, the thief was hanging from a lamp post by his feet, stripped of all his weapons, and scared out of his wit.

The public saw only a glimpse of a speeding shadow when it all happened. They cheered out, "Kage no Desu! Kage no Desu! Kage no Desu!" Toukun went to the corner of another building. He smirked. He liked the name they gave him, yet he never killed anyone. This is because his name meant "Shadow of Death" or "Death Shadow".

At the end of the day, Toukun pet his pet's head and whispered, "Good job. Let's go get some 'groceries' Senshi. You were great today." He and Senshi jumped off to the farms after he changed back into his jean overalls. Kage no Desu walked up to a man that owned a farm shop in the country part of town.

Toukun walked up to the counter and said, "Hey, Bobby. Do you have some apples, tomatoes, and all those other normal ingredients."

The farmer chuckled. His rough beard that went down to his chin and moustache that covered his upper lip muffled his voice. He also knew about Toukun's secret ever since he started it. He said, "Sure we do. But why are you here for that? Shouldn't you be at that really fancy hotel right now?"

Toukun looked confused. "What do you mean? My shift just got off right now according to my work schedule. I'm not even hungry."

"Have you forgotten it's Valentine's Day? You told me you were going out to a restaurant with Asuka for Valentine's Day," Bobby said with a little raspiness in his voice. He got the groceries that Toukun needed from the back. By the time Bobby got to the counter, Toukun had left in a flash, jumping from rooftop to rooftop as fast as he could in his jean overalls still. "Hm... he must've forgot."

Toukun had two other leaf shinobi get beside him. The one on the right said, "Halt! You are not a certified ninja! You must get down!"

"I can't! I need to get somewhere fast!" Toukun shouted at the leaf ninja with some sadness in his face. He never saw what happened, but suddenly the two ninja beside him suddenly stopped. The expecting father looked back to see Fenix and Rin holding the first ninja. Tears were covering his sight, but he smiled, wiped his eyes, and said, "Thanks guys."

"Get going, Kage no Desu!" Fenix yelled out in with a laugh.

"You have a girlfriend to get to!" Rin shouted. Both of them knocked out the leaf shinobi with a push of their pressure points. They walked to each other and hugged. Rin laid her head onto Fenix's chest as she watched Toukun jump away to Asuka.

Toukun got home and quickly washed up and dressed nicely. He used his ninjutsu to teleport himself quickly to the front of the fancy restaurant. Asuka walked into him on her way out. She was dressed in an elegant black, sparkled dress.

Toukun caught her and grabbed her arm. "Asuka! Wait!" he exclaimed to get her attention. She yanked her arm away and kept walking, keeping her head low to hide her face.

"Asuka," the man pleaded.

"Not now, Toukun," Asuka said. "Just... leave me alone right now." She walked not to her own house with Toukun, but to Rin's house. Fenix went to Toukun's house to help him. Asuka was balling her eyes out at Rin's house, too.

Rin helped comfort her. "It's okay, Asuka. We saw Toukun earlier today. He... was really busy today. I'm sure there was a good reason."

With a choked up voice and sniffles every few seconds, Asuka answered, "B-b-but... he left me waiting for two hours! Two hours, Rin! He couldn't have been busy for two hours. He forgot!" She kept balling her eyes out even more. Tears rushed down Asuka's face uncontrollably.

Rin pat her friend's back. "Let's go see, Toukun, okay? I'm sure he'd like to tell you why he was late. Through all the times he's been late for you, there's been a very good explanation." Asuka looked up with red, swollen eyes at Rin. She sniffled and nodded in response. They walked to Toukun's house as Fenix and Toukun planned what to say.

At the creak of the door, Fenix immediately left the house with Rin to let the other couple have their peace. Asuka entered with tears still coming down her face, but it was slower than before.

The female ninja started, "R-Rin tells me that you want to t-t-tell me s-something." Her arms were crossed, and she sniffled more than ever now. Her face looked sadder than ever.

Toukun walked up to Asuka, sullen stricken on his face. He replied, "Yes... Asuka. I need to be truthful with you. I don't have a real job."

"What?" Asuka yelled out, throwing her arms down.

"Hold on, hold on. Let me finish, and then you can go," Toukun said. Asuka crossed her arms once more, listening to what her boyfriend had to say for himself.

"I... haven't given up being a ninja. Before you say anything. I just want to tell you that I don't give it up because I do love you that much. I do it to protect the the village, my friends, and most of all you." Toukun got to a distance of one foot away from Asuka. She stayed silent. "Please talk. Please talk to me." He tightened his fist and looked down, giving out a tear that fell to the floor.

To his surprise, Asuka fell onto him giving him a huge hug. "It's okay, Toukun. I still love you either way." She pressed her wet cheek against his muscled chest. "Is that why you leave during the night at times? I bet it's to practice ninjutsu skills." She looked up at her boyfriend. "Well, from now on. You'll only practice when I'm practicing." Asuka gave Toukun a smile that only curved a small bit. She gave him a long kiss on the lips to seal the deal. "I promise."

Toukun held Asuka by the waist and then stopped the kissing. "Oh! I finally remembered something!" he exclaimed. He gave a whistle to call Senshi. The raven came out with wilted flowers in a plastic bag.

Asuka grabbed them. With a confused look, she asked, "Are these for me?"

Sarcastically, Toukun said, "Oh no. Did they die? What shall we do?" The ninja used a hand sign with one hand to re-hydrate the flowers and make them beautiful once again. They were roses, daisies, and carnations.

Asuka gasped. "Thank you, Toukun! They're so beautiful!" She gave him one last kiss on the lips, lifting her leg and wrapping her arms around his neck.

"Happy Valentine's Day, Asuka," he said softly.

"Happy Valentine's Day, Toukun," she responded. He wrapped his arms around her waist as they kissed and it turned out to be one of the best Valentine's Day ever for both of them.

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Okay, I hope y'all liked this a lot. I definitely liked this one a lot better than the last one. So, yeah. I'm almost certain this is the better one. I couldn't think of a better ending right now. It's night time, and I'm a fifteen-year-old. What can you do?