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Darkness by Gunner Hatfield (its a poem)

When the daylight fades.
the darkness will come to stay.
when the sun goes down.
the shadows come around.
nothing to be seen.
but the darkness and blackest of all seas.
the world lay in wake as the time slips away.
until the darkness is once again banashed to the shadows.
the light grows dimmer every day until finally
the shadows come to stay for an eternity.
but we must always hope that the sun will rise again
to cast of this darkening sea that drowns us in missery.
so be still thine children of god.
for the darkness feeds off fear, if there is no fear.
the darkness will fade leaving wake for the light.
to brighten thine day and let us wake to learn
the hope we had changed the role of destiny.
and so we live with that hope knowing the day light will
always come to banash the darkness away.





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    Charlottiiee
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    commentCommented on: Sun Feb 24, 2008 @ 04:01pm
    Thats really, really, REALLY good!!
    You should be a poet some day
    XD

    Byeee xx


    commentCommented on: Sun Feb 24, 2008 @ 04:39pm
    It's good gunner.
    It reminds me of something.. but i dont remeber what.



    kaykay904
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    Fancy This Vexxie
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    commentCommented on: Mon Feb 25, 2008 @ 12:56pm
    It's really good.
    I liked it.
    It for some reason reminded me of the movie 300. xD


    PICK UP YOUR FEET.
    commentCommented on: Mon Feb 25, 2008 @ 11:22pm
    ._______..................................................___________
    [Aplause].................................................( Cool Poem ! )
    ................................................................v
    ...................................................^(^,^)^


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    CookieJJK
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    Aphrodite Artemis
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    commentCommented on: Sat Mar 15, 2008 @ 04:04pm
    its great mrgreen arty wrote one somewhat simular...but urs is alot better lol


    commentCommented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 01:11am
    wow, baby that was really good. i didn't know u could write such awesome poems!! heart heart heart



    RoxasLuvsEdwardMAndJacobB
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