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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!


Rigor_V
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Why not add a little more magic to the journal entrys I write. I call this work, "Wait out the Eclipse"

Dreaming of warm welcome from elipsed shoreside villas.
could a faultless passion hunt end with bloody killers
falling from the sky like comets via barrage
with crying angels en route with death as their entourage.
A grain of sand that weighes a ton
simple commands, seen as puns.
blinded like eyes staring into the sun
yet worthless is the prayers of weeping nuns
makeshift lifts off clifts
where the root of all evil hands out the guity verdicts
judgement not spared. No, not one strand of hair.
Fryed them in masses with cordless electric chairs.
crusade upon crusade unleashed amongst the unsuspecting
weeding out the blasphemers with lethal disectings
bow to the ground
drown out the sounds
liven up the horrorfest with bombings
little cities with strapnel like bird droppings
chaos will subside
peace will emerge in time.
wait out the eclipse





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Vampyre in the stars
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comment Commented on: Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 05:09am
I got chills. Nice work. ^^


comment Commented on: Fri Mar 21, 2008 @ 12:12am
It was wonderful!!!! It's like the world today..we keep tryin to kill each other! I'm not sure if that was what your intention was for the poem to portray..but that's what I got from it.

I love the music video!!!!!



eternal crimson nite
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