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Kiyo582
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Another added chapter!! You know wat viewers im just gunna post new chapters when i feel like it. So again here comes another chapter of

The Battle For Gaia
Chapter 3: Ambush and the battle of the sisters!

[Our heroes now arrive at there resting point for the night. They are going to camp in the forest for the night.]

Kiyo: I've been wondering how did this group began.

Chibi: Well we all have different storys but we first met 3 years ago.

Catmouth: Well im know i began my quest to kill the Guildmaster when there solidgers came and took away my dad.

Hidan:well I hate the guild they think they own the place. I hate how they capture my villiagers seeing them in terror my friends were also captured so now im on a quest to destroy every trace of that guild.

Chibi: Those stupid solidgers came and took away my friends. They will pay for what they've done!

Kiyo: Hidan duck! NOW!

Hidan:whoa!*a dagger shoots right past his the right side of his face cutting it in the process this left a small cut on hidan's face* Looks like we're not alone!

???: heh! You got real lucky right there!

Kiyo: Who are you?

Catmouth: how many are there?

Chibi: I think theres 1 person in there

???: Thats not important bring it on Chibikunoichi!

Kiyo: Shes stronger than any normal solidger.

???: Hi sister.

Chibi: Moonlight_kunoichi! wth are you doing here!?

Moonlight: well, lets see after you left I remember being captured by the G.O.D. then they brainwashed me to fight you. So now that you know lets fight!

Chibi: Kiyo let me borrow your gauntlets. With them I can stop the mind control

Kiyo: fine then

Chibi: okay bring it on!

Kiyo: whoa they're really fast!

Hidan: remind me to never get her angry!

[in the trees]

Chibi: phew.... this is a good fight

Moonlight: Heh i guess you've really gotten stronger than before you left town.

Chibi: yea... i have! *they both contiune their fight all you hear is the clash of their weapons*

Kiyo: dang this is amazing. They just keep on going! It's hard to even trace their speed!

Hidan: I give up! Its making me dizzy.

Chibi: Alright time to cancel out the mind control! HAAAAA!!!! Wait wth! It's not working. Your not being mind controlled at all!

Kiyo, Hidan, and Catmouth: WHAT!!!!!!!!

Moonlight: Well i knew you wouldn't fight me seriously unless i acted like i was mind controlled.

Chibi: That's where your wrong!*chases moonlight_kunoichi*

Moonlight: No need to get mad!!!!!!!!! I came to help you guys out too! *trys to cool down her mad sister but it was no use*

Kiyo: This looks like this may go on for a while!

Hidan: well im not staying up im getting sum sleep.

Catmouth: me 2

Kiyo: yea but at least we got more help. Not to interupt but i would get some sleep for now!! *but he was wasting his breath because the sisters couldn't hear them*

Kiyo:OMG!!! I give up! Im going to sleep!

*through the forest all you heard was the fight going on between the sisters*

End of chapter 3





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RAINBOW JELLYFISH
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 01:56pm
wah!!!! moonlight soiled my beautiful hidan's face for no reason?!?! She wasn't mindcontrolled!?!?!? then why couldnt she have just asked her sister to fight!??!? DX


comment Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 02:00pm
Also, let me critique your story...(oh no! be scared!!! XP)
The stories kind of go into a different mini-storyline each chapter... it's a little difficult to tell where the story's going, if you put all of the chapters together XP but I do get that they need to defeat the G.O.D. guild. =D I have that much down.



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