Chapter 4 coming at ya!
The Battle for Gaia
Chapter 4: The abandoned town and the G.O.D. prison tower
[Our heroes now approch a mysterious town which appears to be abandoned with a new hero Moonlight_kunoichi]
Kiyo: This is really strange no1 appears to be home.
Chibi: i don't sense any people. But I sence a magic barrier.
Moonlight: me too.
Catmouth: where?
Chibi: Right over there in that house.
Hidan: Lets break it down!*shoots a barrage of holy arrows*
Catmouth: they didn't work! Here I got it.*grabs the barrier and rips it open*
Kiyo: Wow. Let's go inside.
[they go inside and they see a kid sitting in a corner crying]
Moonlight: Wats wrong?
kid: who r u people? Are you apart of the G.O.D. guild?
Kiyo: No, we have nothing to do with the G.O.D. guild.
Chibi: I got a question for you tho. Where is every1?
kid: there in the prison tower. Can you plz help them out of there. They do some evil stuff in there.
Kiyo: like wat?
kid: they...they transform ppl into........monsters.
All 5: monsters!!!
kid: yes and once your a monster there is no way to revert back to normal from what i've heard of. The only way for the person to find true peace is through.....Death.
Kiyo: Thats why they capture ppl!
Chibi: Where is this tower!? MY FRIENDS COULD BE THERE!!!
kid: Its north for here and it not too far.
Chibi: alright lets go maybe we can save the towns ppl and my friends
[they travel to the prison tower and are outside hiding in the trees]
Chibi: we need to make a plan on the actions we take.
[20 minutes after planning]
Hidan: okay lets do it.
Chibi: Hidan. Now!
Hidan: okay!*shoots 2 holy arrows at the entrance guards*
Chibi:Okay, every1 move in!
[on floor 1]
Chibi: Okay now Kiyo go to the basement floor and take out the any guards and if the prisoners are there realease them and wait outside for them. Catmouth and hidan stay on this floor and take out the generator to the monster maker. Moonlight and I will take out the monster maker on the top floor. Move out!
[In the basement]
Kiyo: Yes the prisoners are here. Now to finish off the guards. EAT THIS! Death Star Black Fury!*The D.S. spins like a boomarang and in a flash the guards were cut into pieces and were in engulfed in a black flame* Okay now to set the prisoners free!*Kiyo sets the prisoners free and the prisoners run out of the tower*
Kiyo: alright i'm gunna go help Hidan and Catmouth.
[On the 1st floor]
Catmouth: okay now to destroy the generator!
Hidan:Lets do it Holy Shot!!!!
Catmouth: Holy Cannon!!!!
???: Not so fast! *deflects the holy cannon*
???: No1 destroys anything that belongs to the G.O.D. guild. *deflects holy shot*
???: im the general of the tower.
???: and im the captain of the tower.
Hidan and Catmouth: WTH!!!
Hidan: fine then bring it on!*charges at the captain*
Captain: yea right* shoots a big energy beam at Hidan and it was a direct hit*
Catmouth: Hidan! YOUR GUNNA PAY FOR THAT!!!*a light aura engulfs Catmouth*
L. Catmouth: Bring it!! *Blast them both outside*
Kiyo: Hidan! you okay?
Hidan: Yea!
Kiyo: Umm I think you should go help out ur girlfriend and tell her your okay. She appearently transformed into her light form.
Hidan: Yea.... Lets finish them off!
Hidan and Kiyo: HAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*They both transform into there light forms*
L. Hidan: Catmouth r u okay?
L. Catmouth: Yea but lets finish this
L. Kiyo: Okay!!!
All 3: HOLY BLAST!!!!!! *kills the general and the captain. They revert to their normal forms*
Kiyo: Hidan and Catmouth you 2 go and take the prisoners back to town. Protect them at all cost!
both of them: Okay!
Kiyo: The rest of us will be right behind you!
Kiyo:Okay now time for me to help Chibi and Moonlight out.
[meanwhile on the top floor]
Chibi: this guy is stronger than most people! Moonlight are you almost done with that machine?
Moonlight: I'm kind of occupied!*kicks a monster in it's eye*
Chibi: Crap! We're in some trouble! The tower leader is really tough!*throws her fan at the tower leader* Vayne go help moonlight!
Kiyo: Im coming!! Chibi go help out Moonlight! I got the tower leader!
Chibi: okay!
Tower leader: Another pest! Fine then you wanna fight me too!*throws a sycthe at Kiyo*
Kiyo: Bring it! Death Star force impact!! *the D.S. clashed with the sycthe*
Kiyo: This is gunna be fun!
Tower leader: agreed.
-Meanwhile-
Chibi: HAAAAA!*blows up the monster maker with a deveastaing blow*
Chibi: Okay lets go help Kiyo okay Moonlight.
Moonlight:...
Chibi: You there?
Moonlight: I... found 1 of your friends but its too late for her. Look at the sign right here.
Chibi: The sign says its a horrible experiment gone wrong. Came out to be an abomination with extreme power and it was uncontrolable. It was a resident of the our hometown Moonlight!
Chibi: lets go we must release it from its torture
Moonlight: Okay lets do our team up move!
Chibi: Okay!
*They both put there power into there feet and start running circling the room throwing kunai with a string going through each of them*
chibi: NOW!
Chibi and Moonlight: RINGS OF FLAME!!!!*the monster melted from the flame*
-meanwhile-
Kiyo: heh you were good but not good enough.
Tower leader: LOL!!! You think that you've won well think again! Tower Self destruction secuqence activate!
Tower: Tower will self-destruct in 2 minutes
Tower leader: MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! C ya later!!!!*walks thru a dark door and disappear.
Kiyo: Crap! Chibi!!!!! Moonlight!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where r u!!! We gtg or we'll die!
Chibi: In here! come on!
Kiyo: Lets go!!!
Tower: 1 minute and 20 seconds till self-destruction
Kiyo: Were gunna make it! Wait a minute you guys go on ahead theres some thing i need to get!
Chibi: Make it out alive!
Kiyo: Okay!!!
Tower 20 seconds till self-destruct
Kiyo: here it is! Now to make it out!
Tower: 5
Tower: 4
Kiyo: Come on!!! I got to make it!!!
Tower: 3
Tower: 2
Kiyo: NOOOO!!!!!
Tower: 1
*KA-BOOM*
Moonlight: Kiyo!
Chibi: He didn't make it! Dang it!!
[Back at the town]
Hidan: where's kiyo?
Chibi:*shakes head* He didn't make it.
???: Thats where your wrong!
All 4: Kiyo!
Kiyo: Dang it that was close!
Chibi: your really messed up!
Kiyo: yea...*faints*
Catmouth: Is he okay?
Chibi: Yea. He fainted from exhaustion. Lets take him at the kid's house and all of us rest up for now and we'll move out when he wakes up. We could all use a break.
Hidan: yea.
Catmouth: okay.
Moonlight: yea i could use a break.
Chibi: we should also get supplies for when we're on the road.
All 4: okay!
End of Chapter 4
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Hidan: Lets break it down!*shoots a barrage of holy arrows*
Catmouth: they didn't work! Here I got it.*grabs the barrier and rips it open*
Kiyo: Wow. Let's go inside.
I pictured a bunch of dramatic, glowing arrows and a serious hidan-face. The arrows hit an invisible barrier with a bluish glow, nothing happens. Then comes me, like, "yawn, I got it." Then I pictured me- er...catmouth just like, ripping off effortlessly. XD I love it. Also, here........
Hidan: fine then bring it on!*charges at the captain*
Captain: yea right* shoots a big energy beam at Hidan and it was a direct hit*
Catmouth: Hidan! YOUR GUNNA PAY FOR THAT!!!*a light aura engulfs Catmouth*
L. Catmouth: Bring it!! *Blast them both outside*
MWAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 twisted NOW THAT'S ONE GIRL YOU DON'T WANNA GET ANGRY!!!!!! twisted
I DEMAND MOREEEE OF "The Battle for Gaia" SERIESSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously, dude. I fukin' love this story. =D you've got some serious potential. How about you and me makin' a manga together? you make a storyline, I'll make the art. WhAt'DyA sAy BuDdY 'oL pAl?!?!?1/1/1 LOL!!!!!!