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Well, I had a very wierd thing happen to me last night and this afternoon... I looked at the little balloon that says, 'hey I've got ___ messages', and it said that I had 65,535... I had something similar to this happen before, but it wasn't nearly this big! XD Oh well! In other news.............. erm......... I need a topic... oh jeeze... ^_^; Perhaps.... Fall? Halloween? Cool weather? ^_^ Ah... lovely things indeed... The dropping leaves... the crisp breezes... seeing that one is never too old to go trick-or-treating... XD Like me! I find it funny that when kids turn 13, they instantly think, 'I'm too old for this', and completely quit it! Ha! That's a lie! What do you all think? And now that I still want to write but don't feel like rambling anymore... how 'bout... A POEM! ^_^

Flitting all along the trees,
over hills and across seas,
flying with no purpose at all,
a carefree angel in the fall.
Black as the night against the moon,
it's only thought is landing soon,
and land it does on a lifeless fence,
that creaks and moans in loud protest.
This little bird is here in time,
to see the other birds arrive,
a blackbird with a love for the season,
with no need for foolish reasons.

By the way, I made this up just now, so it may not be as good as others... ^_^; Sorry... and because I didn't add one this whole time... blaugh heart Bilo, everyone!






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h2ozaki
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 03:12pm
Could you write a poem that DOESN'T use a trochaic pattern or rhyming couplets? Your lines don't even have the same number of feet! Pretty amatuer-ish if you ask me....


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 09:15pm
Interesting poem^^ i like it^^



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