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Jak'sDairy of stories
Hi names Jordan but everyone call me creazy kid or Jak.I've allways wanted to write a fantasy story(still in school so no chance)and well here it will start!
Chapter 3:Fate and Death

A man with a metal arm started to walk up to the ruins,"What in then of god happend here?"He asked,"The ruin..started to fall apart...our friend traped inside there."Fal said.Mattew started at the person,"We'll let get these rocksout of the way."SAid the persone,"Wait!Who the heck are you?"Mattew asked him.The persones metalarm had a bit of electric boltsrunning all over it,"Me I'm the fool he didn't finish the job.I'm Jak."
Inside the ruins Jordan had one arm on the walls of the ruins.He had hurt himsef when he had hitthe bottem.His leg was bleeding and it was too dark to tell which way your going,"Reveng is mine at last hahahaha!"The voice was behide jordan.He turned but got slamed into a call and a de-formed arm,"Ghaaa!"Jordan spat somebloodout and was kneeling on the gorund,"Why are you attacking me?"Jordan asked the persone.The persone gave a domenic luagh and the kicked Jordan headmakinghim roll away,"Becuase your oldman ruin my dads dreams of darkness.Now i'll take your lifeto make the odds even!"
"Ok evey stand back!"Jak told them.Fal and Liz went much more back then Mattew and Marco,"He can't be the Jak he died in battle..didn't he?"Liz whispered,"I just made that up to try and protect someone.I turnedout worse.ok here goesnothing.Metal punch!"As he punched the boulders blocking the way the all turned to dust but his metal arm started to bleed blood not oil,"Lets hurry.We still can save Jordan!"Marco said."Right!"Fal nodded and ran in.Liz followed.Just as Jak was about to walk in Mattew stoped him,"Are you realy Jak the hero of light?"Jak sighed,"Ya.Yes I am."
"Ahhhhh!"Jordan was being tossed around by the dark figure,"Stop..please."Jordan said weakly,"This is rather boring.I'll take your life now.Oh and so youknow before you die.My name is Unknow."He took out a dagger and held it to Jordans neck,"Any last word?...what th-"The cialing brokeand Unknow released Jordan,"Metal punch!"Jak jumped down the hole.He grabed Jordan and handed him to MAttew and the others,"Behide you Jak!"Liz shouted.Jak turned around and kicked unknow in the face,"Let move before he turns onto a de-"Jak right arm was clawed of by Unknow.Jak worst fear came true.Unknow had turned into a demon,"Get out now!I'll hold him off!"Fal and Liz shoock the head,"No!You'll die!"Jak smild at them,"I'm allready picked my fate...now go and tell Jordan...i'm sorry for not being therewhen he needed me."Mattew couldn't take it any more and jumped down also,"Get going now!"Mattew shouted.Liz didn't want to but had no choice.Once the got out of the ruins a scream of pain was heard,"MATTEW!JAK!"Marco shouted.Just at that moment matttew came out running bleeding all over his arm and back,"In...car...now!"Marco and the other jumped in,"Wheres Jak?"Fal and Liz asked,"..dead.."Mattew ansearwed them and drove to the nearest hospital.


To be cointued in Chapeter 4:Rivival of the dead





 
 
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